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This story seems disjointed somehow. Like, why after just appearing more or less and knowing nothing is he already broaching the question of romantic feelings. Is he not bothered at all by the fact that she's a completely different species? If not why? Why does Luna feel this way about him, has she been snooping on him for an extended length of time?
It's kind of weird how fast this is happening. Not sure if I'll keep up with this :/
135369 i definitely agree with you there, but just go with the flow and try to understand what's happening so far
It needs a base, no build up.
*nods his head inagreement*
The story is moving at such a fast pace that I can't find this enjoyable. I'm sorry to say I'm gonna leave this story here. Maybe one day I'll sit down and try and read it again, but I just can't find it enjoyable with the way it's going.