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Hmmmmm good chapter but I'm Interested on "lvling up" your magic.
That would explain why I lost conciseness at one point.
can't wait for the next chapter
band is cascasda song is kids in america but the is the ponyfied version
Your British, arent you?
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It's not really levelling up.. I explained it like evolving.. I suppose that was a bad example.
It's like if you practice something for so long, you get better at it. I think it's the same with magic. If you use different variety of spells, and master said spells, your magic will get stronger.
NO Idea if that makes sense.
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No, I'm cooler.
AUSTRALIAN MAAATE.
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I'd have no problem with it IF they weren't like human horses.
Aslong as they looked like the cartoons, then sure
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K, I think it makes sense
Jackson really needs to meet Blueblood
They key to entertain the viewer is conflict.
MOAR CONFLICT!
It took you about 7 chapters to introduce conflict and that was resolved as quickly as it was introduced.
Overall great story, keep up the good work!
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The sequel will contain more conflict. Think of this as an 'intro' to the next story.
I will try to put more conflict in, but trust me, the sequel WILL contain conflict, maybe even grimdark descriptions.