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Perhaps putting more space breaks into your chapters would make it more appealing to read.
Overall really loving this story! Tracking and a 5 rating.
Wow, you finally posted it to this site. Thanks. I normally hate the Human in Equestria story but this is done so well, that I can help but enjoy this. Jackson doesn't suck, every character is in character with the exception of Celestia?(I'm still not sure what are her intentions: getting jealous I get, but threatening another living thing with execution, I still don't understand). I liked the Grease song scene. My only really problems is some of your song picks and your formatting(everything is smashed together, maybe adding a space between lines of dialogue would help the reader).
As payment for this fic, here's a meme:
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Peace Out
this is really good
this is really good
MOLESTIA!!!
I just want you guys to remember this is my first fic. Fututre ones will be better, no doubt.
I'm just writing this to pass time and for personal enjoyment.
I'm using notepad to type up the story (Probably NOT a good idea, so the story is more or less a wall of text ).
>>TheWaffler - Do you mean (for example):
"Reddy and I heard you both in bed lastnight" Vinyl said with a grin and a wink.
"Yeah well Luna and I heard you from Twilight's house.." I replied back, seeing all the blood from Vinyl's face drain.
Should it be:
"Reddy and I heard you both in bed lastnight" Vinyl said with a grin and a wink.
"Yeah well Luna and I heard you from Twilight's house.." I replied back, seeing all the blood from Vinyl's face drain.
Thanks for reading guys
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I have no idea what you are talking about, but if it's something repeated lets just say they forgot..
I read soo many other stories, it's hard to keep track of mine. I can remember the jist of it but yeah..
I'll just go back and read it now
Wow... hehe really liking this story... sugestion for the future... make Luna pregnant (see Celestia's reaction to that)