Trixie and Twilight are best ponies! (Diamond Tiara is best filly :D )
Berry Punch and Berry Pinch are a happy mother and daughter that live in Ponyville. They have many friends there, and, despite being changelings, have managed to live a nice life of obscurity for many years.
But when Berry Pinch finally reaches maturity, she learns that, rather than feeding off of love, she gives it.
How will this new revelation effect the citizens of Ponyville, and more importantly, Berry Pinch herself?
Inspired by Karin/Chibi Vampire, by Yuna Kagesaki.
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i like the idea and i would wish to have another chapter soon my fine sir
also FIRST
I love this!
Although crushing your teeth sounds painful...
Is this chibi vampiers, i dont even know!
Why no changeling tag?
Uhm... by chance do you mean "brushing teeth" instead of "crushing teeth"?
Anyways... This looks interesting and pretty unique. I think I once saw a story or two where a Changeling fed of hatred/misery/something-like-that before, but I've never heard of a Changeling giving love...
Fasinating! I like the premise, continue.
Also is "crushing" your teeth a changeling thing? or maybe a pony thing?
you wrote "bowel" somewhere. It should be bowl.
It is kind of a crossover from the description.
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Aside from that... PLEASE continue! 8D
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you didn't need to be that mean
but ill still continue reading your story
1828157 Sorry. I don't get a chance to use that picture much. XD I guess you don't really know me, then. I can be fairly sarcastic and whatnot. I'm not yelling at you or TRYING to... It's prolly better if I just shut up and say sorry for the pic.
(I'm just a huge fan of Ross, you know?)
1828173 oh ok
well thanks for the apology and well the picture is kinda funny no i really dont know you
but still its ok im fine but thanks
1827773>>1827659>>1827817 I think Yukito is talking about them crushing the 'Fangs' we always see regular Changelings with. That, or it's a typo.
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Huh, I didn't pick up on that one, nice catch.
Not the best thing to find laid out on the table early in the morning, guess they should have let the dog or cat out sooner. fc09.deviantart.net/fs32/f/2008/216/e/1/e11518b22743ac880a2fd6b352e71664.gif
1828198 That would be my guess
Also does this mean that cadence will soon have her own personal student?
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Problem: Changelings in the show clearly don't have fangs when transformed.
Nice to see this actually came to fruition. Though, this isn't the same one from "Diamond Tiara Likes Anime" is it? Because it would kind of freak her out that one of her classmates is the main character.
1828238 I know that, and you know that, but did the writer remember that?
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I defintely want to see more of this. My only complaint is that I would've prefered it if you called her Ruby Pinch just so things don't get confusing and that's what most people call her anyway.
You write so much DAMN GOOD story's
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Alright, those two typos have been fixed. No, the changelings don't have strange morning rituals or anything like that...
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Not quite sure yet if I'm gonna introduce other changelings into the story. There's one OC in particular I have thought of that might be good, but I'm not gonna put the tag in until I'm absolutely certain other changelings will be introduced.
So you did it, huh? The only thing I complain about is the presence of Twixie, which I find plain absurd and was rushed as hell
Other than that, well executed. I'm wondering who'll be her lucky colt (or dragon
). In fact, a Spikeship would be interesting, given Ruby would risk herself with being close to Trixie.
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Oh don't worry, there'll be numerous pairings in here, most of which I personally support. It's a good way to vent out my favourite ships that I find hard to write about :3 The Twixie is gonna be just a BG pairing, at best. The story'd not gonna shift too much focus on them.
Another good story.
Then again, can you even write a bad one?
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Oooh trust me, I've written bad stories before
Well, IMO, at least. But I'm glad you like my stories so much 
I really like the Karin references
...
Good story
Just as good as before my friend keep up the good work
Also FIRST
Oho, the beginning of the 'romance' tag, methinks?
Ohoho…I think I'm going to like this story!
Changelings meet "Chibi-Vampire"
? Faved.
Rumble and Berry Pinch? Ship everypony!
I really like this story keep up the good work
Rumble... Why am i picturing a pony version of Rumble, the mechanized menace from League of Legends?
Fire ze shipping beam!!!
OOOOH! BUUUUSTED!
Uh oh! Never mess with a colt's brother. Berry's about to get Rumbled.
That.... May be the most worthless book ever written.
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Its based off of superstition and guess work, what did you expect? No changeling will just walk over and offer info to their enemies.
Of course, it would be hilarious if a changeling wrote that to troll everyone.
I can't believe it took me FOUR chapters to figure out this is based on Chibi Vampire!
I quite enjoyed the manga this fic is based on and I'm enjoying this as well.
well this is still great man
keep up the good work and cant wait for the ne
xt one
What Manga is this based on?
2025073 "Chibi Vampire" or the English name of it's anime,"Karin" is what it's called.
XD Ahhhhh, Good ol' Berry, trying to set up her daughter on a date... XD
Great, so far everypony and everyling is happy, but when is Twilight going to find out?
She must be new at this. Who busts out death threats and then asks for promises? And then going on to talk about trusting him and trying to live in peace? She's coming off as either incompetent or unstable, and her approach is unlikely to get better results than if she'd portrayed herself as wholly peaceful.
Oh Berry Crunch, you were just degraded from creepy-grandmother-hag to creepy-stalker-grandmother-hag.
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Changelings can't swim? Now why would that be-
Oooooooooh, the holes! Of course you couldn't swim when your legs are filled with holes. Horses have enough trouble swimming already, I can't imagine how difficult it would be for a horse with holes bored through the legs.
Have you been reading Cerulean1313 lately?