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PinkiePiePlease


Avid brony. What else need be said?

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Good Good.

Can't wait to see Colgate turn this douche into a caring human being :D

should be fun fun fun!

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Are you so sure that's how it's going to play out?

Comment posted by karikamiya deleted Dec 23rd, 2012
Comment posted by PinkiePiePlease deleted Dec 23rd, 2012

hmm. you have re-earned your star and your upthumb

Looks promising:twilightsmile:

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:rainbowwild: I figured as much. I hope you stick around to see it through.

Hey guys, it's me the author.

Hello...

To those of you who have read this far, I would very much like to receive some feedback.

Very well.

This story is taking up a great deal of my time and energy

Indeed. This is in no way a small work. I imagine that it consumes a great deal of your time. My writing does too. Even a very basic story of ten thousand words or so takes a few weeks.

and I would like to know whether or not this is making for some pleasant reading.

No.

No, there's nothing especially pleasant about this work. This is very challenging work, one that has taken me from hatred to tears. I despise Daemeon. I was Daemeon once. It "didn't wash". I came into this story expecting a typical My Little Dashie rip-off. I left it shaking and mouthing "Oh, man" over and over.

This is a hard, thoughtful, philosophical work. One of these characters has to have their entire perception of life ruined. One is trying to subjugate the other, manipulating her. At the same time, she'd cracking him open. They are both bound together. There is nothing easy, happy, or pleasant about this work...

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... that's probably why I'm enjoying it so.

I've received virtually no feedback so far and it's becoming disconcerting.

Aha! Welcome to the life of a fan-fiction writer, my friend.:ajsmug:

I'm gonna read this. Maybe not now, maybe not tommorow but one of these days, I AM going to read this. :rainbowdetermined2: For now, favoured for promise of hilarity and intrique in the resulting cultural clash.

Thank you for writing this story. I am enjoying it. I love reading a deep fan-fic, but am unable to find many. I look forward to reading your future chapters!

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Sorry, that was a shock/rage comment regarding Daemeon's harming of Colgate. It was directed to him, not you. Keep up the good story, and draw me into more feels!! I love it!

pssh, The Descendant said this is a good story, cant brain righ now, i`ll read it when its finished :V

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:twilightoops: Uh oh. Ummm, it's not really close to being done. You may be waiting a good long while.

you should fix the intimidating walls of text that your chapters are made of.

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crap... well i`ll start reading it when i get some free time....
first i gota finish a shitton of drawing homework before the 15th :facehoof:

Very good. It deserves to be featured.

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Thank you. With a little editing, EQD said they would take it so it's all good.

This is even better then last chapter. I applaud you sir.

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You have no idea what you've gotten yourself into.

Comment posted by The Descendant deleted Jan 28th, 2013
Comment posted by PinkiePiePlease deleted Jan 28th, 2013
Comment posted by The Descendant deleted Jan 28th, 2013
Comment posted by PinkiePiePlease deleted Jan 28th, 2013

I'm liking Daemeon. He's fairly interesting for some reason.

I've read FO :E, FO :E project horizons, FO :E puppy smiles, Austraeoh, Eljunbyro, and every single winning verse story (including sad alternate) that I know of. I'm ready:ajsmug:

sweet chapter bro.

Comment posted by PinkiePiePlease deleted Feb 6th, 2013

I was brought to this story by a comment from the Descendant, and I would like to begin by saying that this story is far under-appreciated.

I believe that Daemeon is among the strongest characters I have ever read, and I HATE HIM SO MUCH. As of course is intended. I don't think this is going to end particularly well for Daemeon, as he does not deserve it. While I do not particularly wish death upon him, I do want him to realize what he really has done to people, for him to regret it with no hope for atonement.

I agree that this is not a particularly pleasant read, but to infer that I find this a bad fic would be incorrect. It has strong characters and an oddly interesting premise. We watch as a despicable man's world falls apart around him. Every one of us has, at some point, been a servant of our own circumstance, while perhaps not as clearly-defined as a magical pastel pony, certainly no less so. What Daemeon must come to realize is that while we are all just pawns in our world, our lives are no less significant for it.

I agree with my fellow commenters that this story has not received a just amount of appreciation, and I hope it does so soon. I look forward to upcoming updates and to the further development of Daemeon's instability.

I apologize for my rambling.

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I despise Daemeon. I was Daemeon once.

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Surely the poetic craftsman of "A Cup of Joe" could never have been as despicable as he? Out of idle curiosity, was the turning point in your life when you found your faith, or were the two unrelated?

Incidentally, what exactly did you and PPP say that necessitated deleting comments?

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Thanks for the critique. As to the deleted comments, I assure you they were nothing crude. Descy was kind enough to offer some grammatical critiquing. The comments just seemed less relevant after the fact so I deleted them.

Oh shizzle.

Warrun's gonna be pissed when he finds out what happened at the beginning of the story.

Such a good story :fluttercry:

DAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!

Seriously, this story is nothing short of excellent. Daemeon's relationship with Colgate is getting much more interesting, and I'm really scared and excited for when he tells her about what he does in greater detail. I await your next chapter with bated breath, my good sir.

This pleases me.

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I'm glad to see you're sticking around. I know you had reservations when you started.

That chapter was so cute ^-^ :pinkiehappy: I'm eager for the next chapter!

I like the philosophy. You know both ideals so well, its hard to tell whether your religious or not. That means your doing an amazing job.:twilightsheepish:

that was epically amazing. this view of equestria's beginnings make perfect sense to me. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::raritywink:

Also, Daemeon and Colgate are really cute the way they confessed their love for eachother

Damn, that has to be one of the most intricate and well thought out backstorys that I have ever seen. I would have torn myself apart trying to think of something like that.

Also, this song was stuck in my head the entire time reading.

I'm a believer and I couldn't leave her even if I tried...

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