To those of you who have read this far, I would very much like to receive some feedback.
Very well.
This story is taking up a great deal of my time and energy
Indeed. This is in no way a small work. I imagine that it consumes a great deal of your time. My writing does too. Even a very basic story of ten thousand words or so takes a few weeks.
and I would like to know whether or not this is making for some pleasant reading.
No.
No, there's nothing especially pleasant about this work. This is very challenging work, one that has taken me from hatred to tears. I despise Daemeon. I was Daemeon once. It "didn't wash". I came into this story expecting a typical My Little Dashie rip-off. I left it shaking and mouthing "Oh, man" over and over.
This is a hard, thoughtful, philosophical work. One of these characters has to have their entire perception of life ruined. One is trying to subjugate the other, manipulating her. At the same time, she'd cracking him open. They are both bound together. There is nothing easy, happy, or pleasant about this work...
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... that's probably why I'm enjoying it so.
I've received virtually no feedback so far and it's becoming disconcerting.
Aha! Welcome to the life of a fan-fiction writer, my friend.
I'm gonna read this. Maybe not now, maybe not tommorow but one of these days, I AM going to read this. For now, favoured for promise of hilarity and intrique in the resulting cultural clash.
Thank you for writing this story. I am enjoying it. I love reading a deep fan-fic, but am unable to find many. I look forward to reading your future chapters!
1896390 Sorry, that was a shock/rage comment regarding Daemeon's harming of Colgate. It was directed to him, not you. Keep up the good story, and draw me into more feels!! I love it!
hmm. you have re-earned your star and your upthumb
Looks promising
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I figured as much. I hope you stick around to see it through.
Hello...
Very well.
Indeed. This is in no way a small work. I imagine that it consumes a great deal of your time. My writing does too. Even a very basic story of ten thousand words or so takes a few weeks.
No.
No, there's nothing especially pleasant about this work. This is very challenging work, one that has taken me from hatred to tears. I despise Daemeon. I was Daemeon once. It "didn't wash". I came into this story expecting a typical My Little Dashie rip-off. I left it shaking and mouthing "Oh, man" over and over.
This is a hard, thoughtful, philosophical work. One of these characters has to have their entire perception of life ruined. One is trying to subjugate the other, manipulating her. At the same time, she'd cracking him open. They are both bound together. There is nothing easy, happy, or pleasant about this work...
...
...
...
... that's probably why I'm enjoying it so.
Aha! Welcome to the life of a fan-fiction writer, my friend.
I'm gonna read this. Maybe not now, maybe not tommorow but one of these days, I AM going to read this. For now, favoured for promise of hilarity and intrique in the resulting cultural clash.
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Did not what?
Thank you for writing this story. I am enjoying it. I love reading a deep fan-fic, but am unable to find many. I look forward to reading your future chapters!
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Happy to entertain!
1896390
Sorry, that was a shock/rage comment regarding Daemeon's harming of Colgate. It was directed to him, not you. Keep up the good story, and draw me into more feels!! I love it!
pssh, The Descendant said this is a good story, cant brain righ now, i`ll read it when its finished :V
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Uh oh. Ummm, it's not really close to being done. You may be waiting a good long while.
you should fix the intimidating walls of text that your chapters are made of.
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crap... well i`ll start reading it when i get some free time....
first i gota finish a shitton of drawing homework before the 15th
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Thank you. With a little editing, EQD said they would take it so it's all good.
This needs more likes, and free ice cream for all!