Where Butterflies Never Die

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The forbidden forest is on fire, and Angel is inside. While Fluttershy tries to look for him, she goes all the way to the other side of the forest, where something strange and unexpected awaits.

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hawthornbunny

hawthornbunny #1 · Dec 16th, 2012 · · ·

This was nice. :) There's a slight grammatical problem - you should begin a new paragraph each time a different character speaks.. But aside from that, this was a nice and slightly eerie read.

Listie The Scribe Maid

Listie The Scribe Maid #2 · Dec 16th, 2012 · · ·

(Joke) Alt. Title: "Where Sadfics Never Die" by The Yashas

Sharky

Sharky #3 · Dec 16th, 2012 · · ·

i liked this story it made me smile

That1MegaLeaFan

That1MegaLeaFan #4 · Dec 16th, 2012 · · ·

Nice story! But Celestia and Luna aren't goddesses...

theYasha

theYasha #5 · Dec 16th, 2012 · · ·

1809930 really? oops.....

tarkus9

tarkus9 #6 · Dec 17th, 2012 · · ·

1810559

To be perfectly honest it's up for speculation. In the show they're simply referred to as Princesses but the fandom enjoys recognizing them as part of a large Pantheon of Gods both good and evil.

theYasha