(Joke) Alt. Title: Dumbing Home: The Story Of Not-Octavia

This story needs more likes damnit...really beatiful, cute, touchy and well a good clop

Awsome work man

Beautiful QuQ

and you used Background Ponies that are not really well known <3

Loved it

ok i wanna hate this with all of my strength...but i just cant. its so well written, so well put together, and just great and for that, you sir get a like,follow and favorite

you are a genius when it come to gay clop.. love it

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XD that's my drama script character that im working on how did he get in there?! *fixed*

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AWWW THANK YOU!

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*changes man to mam* lol jk idc what you say sir or lady whatever!

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I saw them on the wiki pony list and just HAD to us them!

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well this is awkward

but yeah i should change it to mam and also im a man....and i'll do it again....AWSOME STORY

Good one, you really know how to write a good Erotic story ^^
one of the best 5% of all Erotic stories i have read until now. i only can descripe it as "it is one perfect Orb" no ledge, no corner no fracture, no mistake, just "like a perfect orb": one whole thing.

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Some ponies are very observant. Also sense he is a lawyer and part time astrologist he notices tiny details that usually no pony else would notice.

just cute.

This story is awesome!

The way Concerto felt, what happened to him and just the way you portrayed their emotions gave me
many Feels

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...The clop was also really good :3

I felt a little bit confused by the constant changing of tense in the first chapter. But that's really where the missteps stop. Otherwise this was a gorgeous story - consider me a new follower!

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Yeah I realized that about like maybe 2 days later but I really didn't want to go and change it so much. also thank you for the watch

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AWWW thank you!

Just saw royal riff in the spike pet-sitting episode! Lol they still remember him!

I hope you're proud of yourself. You forced me to add three new lines and a whole bunch of zeroes to my shipping chart. With Concerto, Royal Riff and Orion, the chart now contains 124 different characters. It's getting unmanageable.

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Is it a shipping chart?

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Yeah, I'm in the process of looking at shipfics posted between now and october last year (when I last updated it). Going to process the data in new ways this time. You can look at it here: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0AszGZfUed_wSdHdWNWZUcVA1VXJwb3FEQzE5T3BnS2c&usp=sharing

Years latter came back and its still a masterpiece..

sad, sweet, sexy. overall a very good story. i am very sensitive to typos, and yet this is the only fanfic on this website with this many small errors that still didn’t manage to put me off. on the contrary, it pulled me in and kept me immersed in its lovely story. i applaud you