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After the Hearth's Warming Eve Pageant Discord breaks out of his stony prison, angry that the pageant is historically incorrect by leaving him out of it. Not to be deterred by the Elements until he shows everypony the true history of Hearth's Warming Eve he stops the Elements from being activated and tells them of the true history of Hearth's Warming Eve. In a fit of indignant rage he takes Hearth's Warming Day away from them. Will they be able to find a way to save Hearth's Warming Day and defeat Discord before It's to late? Read all about it in this story of singing rabbits, agonizing torture by paperwork, and magically induced rhyming!

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Now this...

This I could clop to.

Must read on the off chance that it has Seussian Verse.

1794380
It actually does :)

I enjoyed this story. I enjoyed the I'm Mr. Chaotic song. When I saw that and laughed as I sang it out loud.

1797163
Thanks! I was pretty excited about that part.

I.....I don't even......
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Just so many Mustaches for you sir!
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:
This deserves a feature in my opinion, though I did spy a few errors(I kind of forgot where is saw them, this thing is massive :twilightsheepish:)

1804799
Hahaha! Thank you so much :scootangel:
Thanks for letting me know that there are spelling errors in it as well. Honestly thought I got them all.

1804906
Not necessarily misspelled words, but wrong words like Hearths warming "ever" I do remember that for sure, maybe a 'Teh' not sure about that one....I have been on a bit of a fic-binge. :eeyup:

1804918
I found the one instance of "Ever" instead of "Eve" you talked about. Glad I didn't see any 'teh', seeing as I went through the story several times already.

1804918
Also, I wish I knew how stories get featured. I'd like it to be featured specifically since it's a holiday story and is most relevant around this time of year.

1804959 :twilightoops: I have no idea with the recent site update....but if you write it they will come...and if it's epic they will feature it.

1804969
It's completely autmotated based on views, comments, likes vs. dislikes, and I'm guessing the location of the moon in the sky. So I essentially need to be on the server's good terms to be featured. Hopefully it gets featured because of Christmas time and all.

1804995 quick suggestion what do you think of this for your description?

After the Hearth's Warming Eve Pageant Discord breaks out of his stony prison, angry that the pageant is historically incorrect, by leaving him out of it. Not to be deterred by the Elements until he shows everypony the true history of Hearth's Warming Eve. In a fit of indignant rage he takes Hearth's Warming Day away from them. Will they be able to find a way to return save Hearth's Warming Day and defeat Discord before It's to late? Read all about it in this story of singing rabbits, agonizing torture by paperwork, and magically induced rhyming!

It's best for a description to entice readers not give to much away you know, just a thought, I'm sure you can make it better than what I just chopped it into.

1805010
I like it! Thanks for that. A bit better than what I wrote. I think I'll use that as the summary. Nice editing :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Monk With No Name deleted Dec 15th, 2012

1805028 crap one more :twilightsheepish: delete 'return' from

Will they be able to find a way to return save Hearth's Warming Day

1805043
Alright. Made some improvements on your summary and am now using it. Nice work.

1805028 right I wasn't clear I meant the 'and' in

Read all about it in this story and singing rabbits

to of......also there is still a double space from where you deleted return :twilightsheepish: I should have edited my version better

This was beautiful. About time Discord did something good.:pinkiecrazy:

1805935
Haha, thanks. He's chaotic neutral, not chaotic evil in my opinion.

Corny yet sweet, but why didn't Lyra get her human present?

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