This is my entry into the Great Shipping Collaboration. Soarin's Pink Pie is a simple story of how two ponies who didn't know each other end up finding they really like spending time together. Soarin and Pinkie Pie Ship set's sail here. The Wonderbolt's are in Ponyville for a show after the Running of the Leaves this year. Soarin goes out on his first evening looking for a place to buy a pie. He ends up at Sugarcube Corner before close. He ends up buying a pie from a bubbly energetic mare who offers to show him around town and they set off to explore Ponyville over the course of the week before the show.
Chapters (2)
Choppy and a bit sloppy, but I enjoyed it. Show, don't tell.
Well you get points for making the ship work, Soarin and Pinkie Pie is a ship that I'm kind of on the fence with it's not a bad alternative to the numerous RainbowxSoarin or SpitifriexSoarin shipfics but most fans seem to ship him with Applejack, Fluttershy, and Twilight if it's not Spitfire or Soarin and for good reason.
Still this is good, and as for Rainbow Dash well don't feel too bad I'm sure you'll find your special somepony eventually.
1780777 Most likely not seeing as he wrote it for a contest.
Seemed rushed... Bit choppy..... text walls every other moment.............but still good.
If you plan on doing a sequel, try to edit and lengthen this one first.
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BRAVA MY FRIEND!! A FANTASTIC READ!
1780777 Maybe but not till after the holiday's.
I'm certainly pleased at the overall positive response to the story quite a good set of numbers if you ask me for a first day.
1780913 Yes my writing style needs work.
1781785 Thank you for the Support I made it happen as best as I saw fit. As far as Rainbow Dash hard to say when she'll find that special somepony. As a side note don't go telling other ponies what I will and wont do with a collaboration entry.
1781869 Thanks for the support glad you enjoyed it. Despite being a bit choppy. A secondary story isn't really something I've thought about right now but maybe when I have a few moments and I'm feeling creative in the new year.
1782221 Thank you again my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Felt i should respond to those of you who made comments today. I spent the better part of the day away from my computer. I think it's great I got so many view and favorites on this story in the first day. Thank you to all who enjoyed the story.
good story i enjoyed it keep up the good work
Just added this to the main document. Sorry it took me so long. I also read through it agian. Good plot, even though it's lacking stylistically. Develop your writing a little more and you'll be writing great stuff.
I loved the idea of the story. It was great to see a wonderbolt shipped with somepony NOT AJ or RD.
But no offense, this story needed some proofreading or editing. I tried. Really I did. But I only managed to get to where Pinkie and Soarin meet up with RD because the sentence structure was poor.
But it's things like this:
If it's in her head, why is Pinkie referring to herself as "she" instead of "I" It should be something more like "I rarely have conversations this long with my friends, let alone somepony I just met..."
And this:
It sounds like she's introducing Spike to Twilight's assistant Soarin, who is a dragon.
That drive me up a wall. I upvoted because I liked the idea of your story, and because it's a take on a ship that I hadn't ever read before, but that grammar...
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by my secondary edit. Today I've made my third edit and it's up to date right now. I've changed around things in a way that I feel fixes the problems you had with the scenes. I feel it's much stronger now and works much better and the thoughts are more clear. As well as who Pinkie is introducing to whom. I'm very sorry if I was 
with you initially. I was very 
at a lot of things that day. Thank you for the aid with my work and for pointing big problems out. I hope my edits will make you feel.
about this story.
I'm sorry that you were