When Twilight discovers a mysterious object in the secluded part of her library, she learns that some things should have never been discoverd...and that some things are really funny to do.
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Great job on writing your first fic! I can't wait to see more of your work!
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earned yourself a fav
Awesome!!
I can't wait to see them play mario kart or mario 64...dude...I love those games.
Luna has begun her master plan: Turn everypony into a gamer.
Unless they get a copy of... that game...
Spike happens to have the most potential for becoming an awesome gamer in this thing. He learned pretty fast if you ask me, and that's just awesome!
1760822 Which game?
1762537 There is a game spoken of in hushed whispers, for fear it will one day appear in your console.
A game that makes grown men break down and weep at the mere mention of it...
A game that no store will dare keep on their shelves...
This game... is Superman 64!
Thanks Guys
I'll do my best 
I might take game rrequets too..
I want see them play Pokemon Colosseum .
Wonder how Spike would react to the fact that you can imprison dragons and force them to fight.
I want them to play Goldeneye!
or Perfect Dark maybe . . .?
1760732 Ooh I wanna see them play "Mario Party" and make a joke about the games where you rotate the control stick. Some gamers used their entire hand and got major blisters. Nintendo had give them gloves as part of a lawsuit.
Or maybe have them play "Mario Party 2" or "Mario Party 3".
And for "Goldeneye" you'd better have them discover the 'unfair advantage' that Oddjob has.
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Hence I have all those games we'll see which I'll decide and Goldeneye has many unfairness's
1763183 What I mean is Oddjob is hard to hit because he's so small and you have to aim down to even punch him which is hard with the aiming controls. It's a surefire way to be a troll.
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its so funny to make people mad 
Also in the wii version
1763213 That remake was decent, I can understand it was easier to just put Daniel Craig in rather than try to bring back Pierce Brosnan but I really wish they had just made it for the Wii instead of all platforms and had it so that it was only local multiplayer becasue online play ruined what the original stood for.
Plus the protect Natyla mission at the start of the final level was pointless and annyoing and I still have yet to get past it because it's so hard. The worst part is that was specifically added to the remake, it was never in the original game or the movie. Natyla was fully independent.
Better yet, make them play the totally NOT kid-friendly Conker's Bad Fur Day.
Might I suggest StarFox64?
Hey how about The Legend of Zelda: OoT or MM?
Good concept, good concept...
Hm.... How about Mega Man 64? (Known as Mega Man Legends on everything else.)
..Suggestion. Mario games. Party, Kart, 64.
How about Hey You Pikachu? It will, naturally, end with Twilight figuring out that they need a microphone.
Seriously, though, I'd suggest Banjo-Kazooie, or Dr. Mario 64
Doom 64. Do it NAO.
1841183 Mario Party or Mario Kart 64 would work great. But I can't believe you didn't have them discover how annyoing Oddjob is.
Also I'd love to see how they react to Superman 64 the worst game ever created for a home console since E.T. for the Atari 2600 in 1983.
Make them play Majora's Mask!
The N64 version of Goldeneye is rated T to let you know. I would love to see Conker's Bad Fur Day
or Glover later on
first rule of alchemy, Twi.
Sorry fellow readers there's going to be a slight change now....Chapter 3 might come out later than expected hence my computer derped out and now I have to wait for it too get repaired..again..
sorry for the inconvience...but when it does get fixed Chapter 3 will be out before you know it!!
to all i bid, a happy new year!
Now that there are at least 3 of them they should play "Mario Party" let's see if their friendship can survive that.
My gosh!
The plot is thickening!
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Charizard is not a dragon type. He's fire/flying. Resharim the white dragon is the fire/dragon type.
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2261103 Hes a dragon to me
lol I'll fix it later or something
2261137 If any pokemon could be mistaken for a dragon type I think it would have to be Gyrados since it's often used by powerful dragon trainers. Both Lance and Claire use one when you battle them.
Oh cool, a featured. Let' see, probably has more views and likes than mi-
<Notices the story has 500 most views, 800 total.>
<Looks at when first chapter appeared, December so the story isn't "Hot">
<34 Likes>
<His own story has 1300 views total, 700 most on chapter, 74 likes, started updating in December> Huh, my story should also be featured then. Let's see if it's there.
And now to seriously tell you about the story. The idea is interesting but It was already done several times. You keep changing the tenses when describing the situation. Once when you had to use "through", you wrote "threw". You are not using apostrophes sometimes and it can be seen. You are not using commas when needed. The plot starts to slowly turn nonsensical. Scootaloo's part was completely unneeded(What does it introduce to this fic, why is it even here? Does it advance the plot?). Luna played Call of Pony and Celestia knew what it was, so why they called other consoles "The Game Box". Why Luna was trying to hold the controller for Call of Pony in her hooves? The characters could've easily been the original ones or pony-fied instead of turned into Diamond Dogs, as it doesn't really makes sense, And Charizard isn't Dragon Type. Characters are OOC here(You writing that Twilight has attention span of a Rabbit) and mainly the things they do(Twilight fights against Rainbow Dash because she doesn't want to tell her about Nintendo 64.) or even the things they can't do(If they watched the whole tutorial for controlling characters in Smash Bros, WHY THE HELL THEY DIDN'T KNOW HOW TO MOVE THEM or what controller does.). Why do they have spell that makes TV's if they are still unsure about some electronics? For the matter, why is it called TV when the acronym for what they call these would be completely different (MSM). Also, You don't check your facts before you write this, as GoldenEye isn't rated Mature. Also, you tend to overuse ellipses. And Caps isn't needed to make it look like characters are yelling
And last thing. You tried your best at Formating, You atleast managed to remember to indent paragraphs... But when you start giving a new paragraph when they talk and separate them, keep doing it, don't just change it in the middle of writing.
I'm terribly sorry if you are thinking that this chapter is bad, is spam or anything but I wanted to give you Honest to god critique. If you gave this story to Equestria Daily, it would be immediately turned back. I beg you, please don't delete this comment, doing so is the worst an author can do as then he is simply trying to silence all those that say his fic is bad, instead of trying to improve.
And the Chapter Titles. How can you make a mistake in Title of Chapter and be okay with it...
Since its my first fic, im good with all types of reports so...yeaaa thanks
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No, No. You're not using that excuse. No.
I tried it, some people tried it. It doesn't work, it doesn't help. People don't care that much, maybe sometimes. Even if a story is your first one, work on it. Try to find a better editor. Check the group "Proof-readers and people willing to proof-read". Ask some authors who were succesful with their stories and got featured. That's the way to go.
Also, it is called review.
Do you have editor(s) for this? I'm sorry, but I couldn't finish the first chapter, it burned horribly against my OCD.
For what I've seen and heard about this, you need a good editor. Ponies with video games is a proven concept if done right (see Luna Plays), but I don't think this is doing it right. I know this is your first story, but this needs to be improved.
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SCREW THIS, IM BUSTING OUT OOT!
I have one game for you to do:
Star Wars Episode 1: Podracer.
(This game:
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That is all.
This can't be good.
Just.... Wall of text.