The ground has been shaking everywhere, and there seems to be no reason behind it. But when an ancient power stirs beneath the ground, every living thing must band together in order to stop the rapidly aproaching apocalypse.
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Is this 40k?
Pretty good, if kinda rushed. Also, try to use more formal language when it comes to letters exchanged between Celestia and whoever else.
In conclusion, a good start!
I am interested, good sir. your writing style always seems to appeal to me. i did notice one little glitch though.
""Dear Rrincess Celestia"
Otherwise good job
Live long, write fast,
Titan
I am interested, good sir. your writing style always seems to appeal to me. i did notice one little glitch though.
""Dear Rrincess Celestia"
Otherwise good job
also Shame on you, who ever down voted this story. It is to early for that!
Live long, write fast,
Titan
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I got it.
Also, thanks on the style compliment. As I believe I said back when I was working on "The Artificer", That was my first time writing a cohesive story. I feel like I'm getting better, but it still encourages me to write more when people like it.
Another thing, I would normally agree with you on the downvoters, but I feel like they have the right to express themselves. If only they could say what was wrong with it.
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No, it isn't 40k... Although I have a couple of 40k crossovers flying through my head at this point. I don't want to spoil the big reveal scene, so I wont say just exactly what it is. So instead I'm going to be cheesy and quote Prometheus: "Big things have small beginnings."
And thanks for the pointer on formality.
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No problem. It was the first time I've given constructive criticism, so...
Only thought it was 40k because Thousand Sons.
The title of the story and the the first chapter make me think this is a mtg crossover if anything. If so then have a Pinkie.
Hmmm is that what I think it is.....
(Joke) Alt. Title: All My Dusting
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It very well may be.
We'll just have to wait and see...
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That's a title for...
YESTERDAY!
Your welcome
Finally got down to reading this. Like your work as always but the chapter seemed a little bit..... Aquward in its wording. But I still loved it !