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try to give more details. spend more time on one chapter at a time, but besides that not a bad fic,
good job
this is a empty chapter....
DONT PUBLISH YOUR CHAPTERS WITHOUT ANYTHING WRITTEN ON THEM
i love the countless twitroll segments!
make the chapters a bit longer tho,kay?
A good FIC, but the chapters a very short.
Keep going.
173827oops, sorry
Ok, I'll make a big multi-chapter now.
Question: should I give Quinn some sort of supernatural thing? Cause I kind of set things up for that?
1738724 Depends on what kind of supernatural thing your talking about. If its like what I have going for me, I think Quine would be screwed -__-
Are you not enjoying my company?
1738985 well, I'll try to integrate it without being corny.
Also, for a hint, look in chapter 1.
1739129 Il take another look then :)
Although the chapter's are short, I like it, you earn a follow from me.
Awesome story. And pleeeeeaassseee find a way to give him the ability to fly! I think it would go great with how he enjoys the feeling of falling. Maybe have twilight make some magic wings?
And a little bit of editing advice... I think... Take it a little slower!
Be just a little more descriptive and not so fast paced to give the reader a a chance to really enjoy the story. The story started out like this, but it started to drift away from it at around chapter 3 or 4.
Anyways! Great fic! Have a like and a favorite
so author, what's this story cross-overed with? :p
Thanks!
And the crossover is a mistake. I'll Chang that. Sorry.
1738724
YES!
DO IT!
i have no idea what supernatural power you will give him...
1741505okie-dokie-loki!
I'm writing it now! It might take 2 or 3 more chapters to reach full awesomeness levels.
1741616*turns up beat*
AAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
1738724 As long as it's in reason, I don't see why not.
I'll post one more before I FALL asleep
I saw the description and i freaked in joy. Story looked great, i just read the whole thing. the character is cliche, yet not... He is way too easygoing. Of course, that's hist nature, but how many people get transported to another dimension and go "yo wassup". I like the guy's attitude, but make him more surprised. make him not very social, if you keep referencing these noise he makes... sounds like your saying he has tourettes, I could edit for you if you want, but you would probaly (unfortunately) have to start from scratch again. It wouldn't be bad. this is similar to a rough draft as a way of saying it. You have alot of potential, and this story has clearly been studied for a good amount of time, but there are these moments that are well.... facehoof worthy. It is still a good story, and i'd be more than happy to help work out the story. I'm not the best grammar guy though
1742818hmmm, you give me much to think on...(strokes his mustache
) ill get back to you on this...
Also, I'm never going to stop revising. Life is a rough draft. Never finish.
YEHS!!! TEH DOCTAH!!! c:
I'm not ma monkey! check your grammar
1744267thanks!
Revisions are in process. Please stand by.
oooh lol I just got back from a sad story and I saw this updated and now, I have claimed this place, so that ALL shall see my post, no matter if they want to or not! I came first, so that makes all of your arguments invalid.
DAMNIT RESIDENT
USE THE FORCE QUINN
Good story, but could you PLEASE do me one favor? Add one more or one less word to this chapter. I don't care what it is, but the number of words in this chapter is not a good number. Also, my attention. You have caught it. Although it did seem a little rushed.
This entire story, although very entertaining, is one of the most rushed stories I have ever read. I shall follow and thumbs up, but before I go, I have three words for you.
DETAILS, DETAILS, DETAILS!!!
1754105slow down I shall. Apologies I give to you. Speaking fast normal is for me. And like this speaking. Your thirst for details shall be quenched! Have fear not! ( insert heroic Luna pic here)
sound magic? FUCK YEAH*godamn iPod keeps me from doing size.*
I'm glad you approve.
Now that I have you here, reading this against your will, tell me, should I add a badass fight scene? Or two? Tell me your secrets
I don't know it you were going for this or not, but this part of the story reminds me of the Magic School Bus and it's episode on sound. If you want to add a fight scene, I think you should do it after Quinn learns how to use his powers.
1754982 stone golems, make them vibrate so hard they fall apart.
your pacing could use a little work sir. this isn't a chapter this is a page
hahahaHAHAHAHA
omg she knows
omg awsome
have him fight discord and king sombra and the changlings
i like it make him fight discort the changlings and king sombra and any other bad guy that has not shown up yet
1762991ok I'll work on it
i will be waiting patiently<(spelling?)
Freaky. It sounds like me.....
hmmm.....short.....interesting...
*falls out of chair laughing* I CAN"T STAND HOW HILARIOUS THESE SHORT CHAPTERS ARE!!!!
heh, I'm the only one here.....
HOLY BUCKING CELESTIA!!!!!! QUINN'S MY NAME!!!!! Spelled exactly the same way and all...I am some what disterbed (can't spell out of freaked outness)now.....
ok personality.......check........name.......check.....hight.......oh so close I'm 6'1".....damn.....