Ten years after King Sombra attempted to reclaim his throne, a long, bloody war broke out between the griffons and ponykind. The war lasted three dreadful years. Many lives were lost, including that of Princess Celestia's. Nine years after the peace treaty was signed, Cadence and Shining Armor have taken over as King and Queen of Equestria.
Luna has been taking care of their foals, and one day, a filly by the name of Amoura asks Luna what's been bothering her.
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Hello guys. This is my first fic so i hope you all like it.
. This chapter was slow on purpose but if you don't want me finishing this I wont.
Any feed back is wanted and appreciated. And also, big thanks to my pre-reader yayflutters for all the advice to everyone go read his fics after your done with mine.
Oh my.
I haven't read this yet, but I will.
For now though,
That picture... It's too much sad.
This story. I like it.
I thought it's good the way it is. Keep up the good work!
1717312 What do you mean by "slow"? I thought it was very wonderful. Not everything needs to be rushed, you know.
how do ah favorite it?
'it was awesome btw.
1718506 Click the star symbol next to the ratings at the top of the page. That will both favorite it and set so you get notifications for any future updates.
Also at 1717312 Read it now, and I'm interested.
Awaiting more eagerly.
Ok, guess we need to prepare our tissues for the coming chapters.
More please.
I enjoy this.
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Dude. No. THIS WAS HORRIBLE AND YOU SHOU-
Oh right. I edited this. I almost forgot.
Awaiting more
Wow I really didn't expect this, thank you for all of your kind words.
1719101 I thought you did a HORRI- oh wait this would have been worse if you didnt edit this.
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I know this was actually pretty TERRI-
Oh,
Ok.
HEY FANFIC!
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1725233 Thanks?
I got my eye on you too.
OHH, i'm starting to love this fic
, please make MOARRR
I am glad to announce that Chapter 2 is almost to pre read/ edit phase (Be ready yayflutters)
I suspect this will be submitted in the next day or so.
Here we go guys, Chapter 2.
You might think this Chapter will have a different tone than the rest of the chapters. You would be right.
Also big thanks to yayflutters today for editing while he was at school and i was sick.
One more thing, I regret nothing!!
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I regret everything! Wait, wat
This doesn't even
Okay
It's the civil war that I'm curious about. Is it Equestrian, or the Griffins'?
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1749972 Dont worry, your answer will be answered in the next chapter. I understand your confusion.
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Ah, sorry. I guess I didn't catch that when I went through and cleaned this up..
realy looking forward to next part
Wait, how could Luna age? Is it her emotions that is changing her? And why are Shining Armour and Luna cold towards each other?
It seems i have some explaining to do
1953566 Yes, you do. But don't rush it though, there is a saying in my country which says something like this (translated from Maltese to English): "A cat in a hurry gives birth to blind kittens", which basically means that the more you rush, the less the quality of the product.
I dont intend on rushing. I feel like this chapter WAS lacking to the other chapters. That is because well. Present day doesnt have much to do with the concept of this story. Its just a footplace
Luna's kinda like a filly in this chapter, except that she knows when enough is enough.
update soon?
Torroza Im so sorry but I am just having a crazy time in my writing career. I promise that, at the latest, a new chapter will go out at Spring Break. (At the very freaking latest. I mean gosh, I hate when writers do this and dont update their stories often but here I am doing it?
) So I am truly sorry but it might be a little bit because I am just generally lost with this story. All the variations of the next chapter wasn't very good and I didnt want to release them. So this is a long comment and ill try to stop it in the next line. Im sorry but it will be a while because I am lost and need help.