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Oh my.
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Enjoy.
Looks at title...
Oh boy
Sorry mate, but I can't like this.
Undoubtedly, with the amount of followers you have who like porn...
Yeah, this'll get featured.
Instant wingboner.
Not gonna read it, but the art reminds me of Ask Velvet... (don't ask why)
I'm scared.
1731084 Because the artist runs Ask Velvet...
1731110 forgot to click the more link... just too tired right now, I guess
1731122 Yeah, it happens.
I have no fucking clue what Edifice and Orifice mean, but I assume they're some kind of fetish.
and then everyone walked le dinosaur
Uhm....... Ok.
inb4 this story idea was used.
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Nope, that was horrible, and the reason it was so horrible is because this was so well written, and so fucking nasty.
That was wierd, even by my standards.
Rarity growing some kind of marshmallow flavoured boil on anything she touched, that is just fucked up. Although I was expecting self canabalism so my defenition of fucked up may be a little skewed.
1731133 Orifice means hole or opening
Edifice means building or construction
I read what this was based off of a while ago, and I'm still grossed out by it.
Other than that, it was well written.
...what the fuck just happened...
My...
Sides...
THEY HURT FROM THE LAUGHTER!
Well, I'm actually shocked. DANG, son. That one's gonna haunt me for a while.
Let me make a wild crazy guess and say that the initial idea was made in Japan?
See description.
Read Henmaro Machino.
Start laughing.
We'll see how this goes.
1730986 1100 followers? Congratulation, but there will be much more, I can feel it
OK, pal, I admit my defeat...
Usually I avoid "dark" and "tragedy" tags like the plague, this time I made an exception just because of the author. Your writing skills are amazing as always, even if I managed to read only until the part in which all the pimple thing started happening...
Call me a chicken, call me a coward, but I hadn't the courage to go to the end of the story...
You get my upvote, and whenever you'll be around where I live in, I'll gladly buy you a drink or two.
Now if you all excuse me, I'll go wash away the images from my head with a bottle of scotch aged at least 12 years...
See y'all later!
And then, Rarity was a sponge.
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I... This is the first time a story has completely terrified me. What. The. Fuck?
Is there a fetish for this? Please tell me there isn't.
Actually, don't say anything. I'd rather have this question unanswered, thank you very much.
...Why did you make me live through that again!? The original freaked me out enough! At least it didn't have visuals this time...
Mmm creepy. I've read the doujin/whatever this is based on..
Not really sure what to say, so I'll let Mr. Wayne react for me.
The only part that lost me was the bit about how she thought someone else was controlling her body (the whole making her say stuff scene). On the one hand, the image of her begging for help but being unheard was beautiful, on the other hand, the idea just sort of comes up and vanishes.
It took me all of two seconds to realize what this was based off of... i need to get off the internet.
What was this based off of or it's inspiration?
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The Holes, by Machino Henmaru
You know, I'm not sure if I should be afraid of this story... or my own lack of reaction beyond a "huh". Has the years browsing the net, especially the darker recesses, deadened me so? I suppose I can blame it on the doujinshi (so much doujinshi) and private art sites. America has nothing on the truly twisted stuff over in Japan. Twilight would never want to use a memory spell on my mind... not with the high-octane nightmare fuel stored up there.
Still, now I'll have to go check out The Holes so I can sate my curiosity.
...and you know what, I kinda liked this one. It was rather well written with a [demented] Twilight Zone/Outer Limits ending to it.
What. The. Hell.
. My lady succumbed to such an illness.
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That's what I was going for. It's not like Rarity did anything to deserve it. She was just a tragic victim of circumstance.
And if you've read the manga that inspired this story, you'll know I added several details which weren't in the original. I'd like to think that my inclusions added some pathos to what was an otherwise vapid hentai manga with disturbing imagery.
Here, have some Crooked Trees to complement your story:
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I'm getting banned so hard for this...
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It was about the illusion of control. Rarity figured that she was the one in charge, but she was being used. Was it by her subconscious, or some parasitic entity? I purposefully kept the origin of the boils and the modus operandi of the contagion a mystery. The purpose of the disease was to create a need for pleasure by instilling the body with pain. The infection encouraged Rarity to be in a state of perpetual masturbation. Any attempt to deviate from that course resulted in painful itching sensations throughout her body.
It's revealed Rarity can't control what she says anymore than she can control what she does. Rarity's edifice (her body) has become a slave to her orifice (the holes in her body; specifically her vagina).
I may go back and add a sentence to help flesh out that plot point.
The part with the pimples was stupid sexy. I think you did a great job adding to and sprucing up the source material. Poor Rarity held hostage by her own body.
1732549 THE FUCK!
mix mangas with clopfics
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Not sure if i want after what came googling that name.
No, definitly not my thing
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But hey, the mixing concept was an interesting idea.
That was...sad actually. At first I was just grossed out, but toward the end of the story it was just depressing. The loss of control of oneself is a scary thing. Loved the whole Twilight Zone feel of the whole thing.
~Have a good one.
HOLYSHITWHATTHEFUCKWASALLOFTHIS
I liked it
Holy fuck that was brilliant. Well done sir, this is possibly the most fucked up tale I've ever read.
WHAT THE DERPITY FUCK MAN.
1731070 It's a little... unnerving. I'll give it that much.
pretty interesting im going to write a clop myself soon so i migth as well read as many as i can to get the idea of writing one
....... Oh Gawd. This.....this is...well, there are other manga's that I would never want to see ponified, and this was not one of them.
But still. What the hell, Bronystories.
+1
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But are they good ones or bad ones?
This is pretty fucked up. I'm pretty sure this is more fucked up than the anal spelunking boards on 4chan. In fact, I know it's worse.
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Could I have a picture and your name please?
(I'm not serious, but that joke only makes sense if you've watched or read Death Note.)
I can't decide if I sohould be aroused or disgusted.....