• Published 4th Dec 2012
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Equestria's Greatest Hero. - TKM

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Thank god. Anne was a bitch.

1741875 ANNE BARELY DID ANYTHING

1743147 Haha IKR?

TKM

Boobs on a stick.

:facehoof:dude i read a lot off sorys some good some bad but the Britis accent throe the whole writing and the "gurd dog" the basment fear thing and how you just discrased my home state of CA not cool dude :flutterrage: your idea has potechal heck i'm a crappy writer but a good critic that cant cretic his own shit but i can finde simads in a coal mine a dude this thing needs work like strap dynamite too it and start from scrach sorry dude but thats my oppiun serirsly you may what to keep the idea but start from scrach story wise my bad if you cosder this flamming but dude some times you need to sound like a bad guy too get a point across and for that i am sorry:pinkiesad2:

I wonder when the next chapter will be made?

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