...well then......get the lube

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Pretty sure this fits perfectly.

Haha ok I'm hoping you're joking right... Right?... Right?!

Needs a proofreader. Other than that, seems promising.

not badill be tracking

lets see where this fic goes shall we. (Tracking)

Cannot tell if Troll fic, or actual story in development...

Anyways, MOAR!!!!

Name's Jack.
Pleasure to make Your acquaintance.

Henry leaned down to untying from Joan putting her leash in his hands and begun walking towards Celeste's house. Henry looked around and realized that the sun wasn't up, maybe he just imagined it. It took Henry only ten minutes to reach Celeste house that's what he estimate. Celeste house was a medium modernly built house, which was spotless white on the outside. Henry walked over to the door to ring the door bell, but just like a psychic Celeste opened the door before he could even touch the doorbell.

Just some advice, you shouldn't repeat a character's name every sentence. It just makes the entire thing feel awkward.
Try this instead

Henry leaned down to untying from Joan putting her leash in his hands and begun walking towards Celeste's house. He looked around and realized that the sun wasn't up, maybe he just imagined it. It took him only ten minutes to reach Celeste house that's what he estimate. Celeste house was a medium modernly built house, which was spotless white on the outside. He walked over to the door to ring the door bell, but just like a psychic Celeste opened the door before he could even touch the doorbell.

There are some other small things, but that seems to be your main problem. If you need some help, or an editor feel free to ask.

That was pretty dickish in the start