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The Night After & Before

A Short Story Taking Place After the night of the parade and Babs initiation into the CMC, centering around Babs Seed & Apple Bloom

Slice Of Life, Drama, Melancholy, Friend-Shipping.

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dbzponyninja

dbzponyninja #1 · Nov 28th, 2012 · · ·

Good story my friend I liked it alot well done.

Meadow_Elune

Meadow_Elune #2 · Nov 28th, 2012 · · ·

Very nice work.

Small thing:
"the crickets played their most relaxing balled yet"
- should be ballad.

AppleSeed454

AppleSeed454 #3 · Nov 28th, 2012 · · ·

>> @Knight Whoops your right, shoulda triple checked for typos before posting *Blushes* Have to fix that later.

Also Thanks DBZ, its actually my first time attempting to write a fanfic, so I tried my best. Glad you enjoyed it, I was hoping that at the very least it would turn out readable .

Dragon Master Spike