When Scootaloo gets caught in the storm of the century she finds her way to Twilight's LIbrary where she takes refuge. She joins in Twilight and Spike's little game and finds her heart touched by the librarians assistant. She tries to get Spike to see how she feels but is cut short by the Evil Enchantress Twilight SparKill who whisks her off to a creepy dungeon. Will Spike be able to rescue her from the clutches of evil?
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Not bad. If anything it seemed rushed a little. Besides that, I'm impressed.
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yay a D&D fic
I give this story a like for content and few grammatical errors.
I would give it a down-vote for abruptness, shortness, bad description, and not enough attention to detail. The story itself was enough to get a "D'awww" out of me, but it could have been better if you set the stage a bit more. Plus, you had a few random details put in, like Twilight looking out the window and forming a fog-oval with her breath. That would have made more sense if the whole story was consistent like that.
Edit: Just clarifying, that one down-vote is not me! I liked it, I swear!
nice story i thought it was cute
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Haha well thanks, ill admit this one has been sitting in my folder for a long while. I just kinda threw it up here to get a daw or two so I'm happy I can at least evoke that reaction. Mostly this is sorta a teeny tiny pimping to the rest of my content. Which will be expanded on and preferably improved. So maybe check that stuff out and leave constructive comments there! =P thanks and stuff!
1699402 Pimping? //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Scootaloo_lolface.png
So let me get this straight: Twilight and Spike took up temporary residence in Ponyville's library, got to know Scootaloo, learned about some of the enemies they would coincidentally face a few years from this point, then moved back to Canterlot ... and all this happened several years before the pilot. That's the only explanation I can think of for Spike acting like a seven-year-old in this fanfic.
Don't get me wrong, it was a very sweet, adorable, heart-warming story. It could be better, thought, if it made sense.
In a good way!!
SPARKILL!? SPARKILL!?
I am so gonna ... do nothing about this!
1699507 on dear! So sorry! Super honest I knew nothing regarding your name at the time of this writing!
dont kill me...
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Well, you do have the 'evil' bit right...
And she is enchanting...
In the words of scootaloo...
-Kiryu
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Oh, I'm kidding!
Just give me your first born, and we'll call it even.
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You are SO my favorite!
A little rushed but still a sweet story
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If only this was longer. But, it's still glorious.
its pretty good but they shold make it longer or make another story out of this
Short, and sweet. A nice little treasure that I am happy to have stumbled upon. Keep up the great work
I liked but i think it would be more Sweatie bells thing to play princess than Scoota's over all good story
Cute and simple.
Nice and sweet.
If it only was longer
Twilight SparKill...
Quite cute
Well it was definitely an interesting read if anything. I enjoyed it regardless of the size, bit longer couldn't have hurt but oh well. Great job though!
Sincere, loving and caring. I like this story a lot, the pairing even more so, excellent job my friend, just wish there was more of this pairing.
Really cute story!
what an adorable little story, all the stories I've read have truly inspired me, yet I still need to figure out to do it, I'd really like some ideas/help if its not too much trouble?
Without even opening the story yet the plot summary kind of makes it sound like that one comic dub of Philly Twilight being rescued by Young Colt shining armor in their little game of pretend and Spike is a complaining about why he's always playing the bad guy whenever they play rescue the princess