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Book of the Mirror Pond

A followup to "Too Many Pinkie Pies", answering the question of what exactly that book was and why it was hidden.

Will have OC's later. I should be able to pull it off

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Elfling42

Elfling42 #1 · Nov 25th, 2012 · · ·

SO MYSTERIOUS! I MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

HearthFire One

HearthFire One #2 · Aug 25th, 2013 · · ·

It's a good story, I'm quite interested what will happen next.

But there were some things that bothered me. Like when Spike said "Ow!" as he went trough the thick bramble, and Rarity didn't made a peep. As I recall dragons have thick scales, and don't really feel this kind of stuff.

And then where you used "people" in a sentence. "The death toll was small, and the war itself was uneventful, so not as many people know about it."
I would try to avoid such words in a pony story.

Overall it's a good story, and I hope you'll write the next chapter, I really want to know what's up with that army.

Good day!