This story will introduce my ideal of Celestia and Luna's parents (as well as the parent of every other living thing, in the Creator's case) as well as a new little sister of theirs (who also happens to be a personification of death, mainly because the Destroyer is bored of doing it himself.) Eternal Sleep does not want to do this, but her father will not have her quit on him so easily...
It's AMAZING Tis quite an interesting read and I most certainly look forward to your next chapter
1659976 Thank you! :D
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I wanna see what happens here
1665465 Thank ya, glad you enjoyed it :D
A great story indeed. I recommend that you either make a sequel or continue this, I would love to read more, like what is celestia's reaction to what happened?
1679420 Thank you very much I was planning on doing a sequel, beginning on monday, but I figured that would be a little too soon, y'know? Regardless, I do plan on doing a sequel eventually~ I'm glad you enjoyed the story
The concept is new, and I like the way you set it up, but the multi paragraph speakers... why...
1754552 Sorry about that, I'm still kinda new to this whole writing thing xD I'll try to correct it from here on out, alright? Otherwise, glad you liked it
overall your doing good it is very intresting and i like your choice of words
1807131 Thank you
I LOVE this story!!!! And this is just the first chapter!!!
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1809190 Glad you enjoyed it
violent ending....
i like this story its awesome
1867681 Yeah, the ending was by far the easiest part to write for me
Again, I'm glad you liked it
How can people dislike this story!? Such a great one if you ask me!! Lovin' it