"Great, now if I join Chess, I could probably push for a higher pay, but I'd probably be used as a mascot."
rofl, he is such a down-to-earth guy, for a unicorn
Heehe. Hello, Screwball.
The statue, one of Discord doing some kind of dance
Every day he's shufflin'!
"Rocky, LeFlour, Trunip, Lints-A-Lot."
Haaahaha wow. This keeps getting weirder xD
Sweet mother of children
lol. I'd say that's pretty redundant, if not for the fact it specifies that that specific mother has at least two :p
and he would use it to end hunger in the wasteland by supersizing all the fruit on the trees and making it rain chocolate milk, ushering in an era of peace, prosperity, and complete and utter anarchy.
Welp. Of all the possible things one could believe in out there... this isn't any less plausible than the others. And I like these guys' style
Wow. "The slaughtering healer". Quite a nickname you acquired there, Fluttershy
she thought it'd be slutty to wear see-thru clothing in public.
This Screwball is sublime
"Or is this mere industrial espionage from Solaris or Stein?"
Haa, Solaris. Can't do a Wild Wastelands fic without mentioning those guys :D
"'M.o.P.W.H.P.S.a.T.O.S.' ...Or you can just call me Oliver, since I can sense how scared your tongues just got."
I dunno. "Mop Whip Satos" kinda has a nice ring to it
"For some reason walls like this have been known to withstand attacks that turn power armor to slag"
Pfff, game logic
"That's what I love about you organics, no targeting computers, just the Force, or whatever it is you use."
Haaha, wow. That came out of nowhere. Just the fact he thinks organics need something to replace the concept of 'targeting computers'... brilliant
Well, nopony except Screwball, who had to be convinced to stop hugging me before she let me move.
Squishy ghoul hugs! Gotta love 'em
Bwaahaha. A "T party"
This was awesome. You still rock, man. Keep on rocking
Some Corrections: > It's been a couple while since I was here. a couple while? > to whether I would accept it if he offered, my mind was too occupied That comma after "if he offered" should be a semicolon. > Besides that boredom was easily countered Comma behind "besides". > Suddenly, Screwball popped in front of us, grinning wildly. You kinda never mentioned her name before this. Click shouldn't know it yet. Fix that! > especially ¬¬¬that bastard Deadshot Calamity... What's with the ¬¬¬? > What that thing does is basically sends out a kind of spell is basically [send] out
"When it rained bagels, that's free food for everypony! Radioactive coyotes can be seen glowing from a mile away, you'll be able to see them coming and escape them easier! The one who was selling Dash and Mint-als: Hello! Chems are bad! Everything the cultists have done has been helpful somehow!"
You forgot to add him asking how many STDs the ex-slut had been happily spreading around
2736598 Thanks again for the critique! Glad you liked it. I gotta keep watching some of those errors. They always pop up when I try to change lines. As for those weird L thingies though... I don't know where those were, or even what the fudge they are. Creepy.
So far, I'm only 20 minutes and 21 seconds into the Text to Speech reading of this chapter, (Last line read: "You guys are free to go. I'll be at the town's hotel, Bishop, Knight, try to be there by tonight.") but as of reading, I can already tell I'm gonna like this chapter. It's silly right out the gate, and the radio ponies have been neat. I'm on the radio: One of the cooler feelings from Fallout 3.
3111760 Glad you're liking it so far (next chapter's in the prereading stage ) I really should try doing some text-to speech reading, sometimes I just can't deal with a screen.
3112178 If you want to try Text to Speech of content on the web, I would recommend Soundgecko with Mary's voice since there's plugins to make it a one-click conversion process with links sent to email or mobile phone. Alternatively, you can send documents to Zamzar with the MP3 conversion selected, which reads it with AT&T Mike. Mike doesn't sound as natural as Mary a lot of the time, but he gets the job done.
For desktop software, I use Textaloud 3. Mary's voice (the same that SoundGecko uses) seems to belong to NeoSpeech and costs more than I'm willing to spend right now.
I like TtS since it helps prevent me from getting stuck in loops of reading the same paragraph dozens of times, and it's easy enough for me to get a stack of stories that sound neat, convert them all, and toss the stack of MP3s onto my smartphone to listen do during the daily commute. That's easily an hour daily of time I'd have spent with my mind wandering instead spent enjoying My Little Pony stories. Or blogs. Or whatever other text I tossed in that day.
(Youtube had an interactive transcript that would sync up video/audio playback with a text transcript of reading, as well as display subtitles on the video. That was a pretty neat trick.)
Oh gods. Should've seen that coming xD
rofl, he is such a down-to-earth guy, for a unicorn
Heehe. Hello, Screwball.
Every day he's shufflin'!
Haaahaha wow. This keeps getting weirder xD
lol. I'd say that's pretty redundant, if not for the fact it specifies that that specific mother has at least two :p
Welp. Of all the possible things one could believe in out there... this isn't any less plausible than the others. And I like these guys' style
Wow. "The slaughtering healer". Quite a nickname you acquired there, Fluttershy
This Screwball is sublime
Haa, Solaris. Can't do a Wild Wastelands fic without mentioning those guys :D
I dunno. "Mop Whip Satos" kinda has a nice ring to it
Pfff, game logic
Haaha, wow. That came out of nowhere. Just the fact he thinks organics need something to replace the concept of 'targeting computers'... brilliant
Squishy ghoul hugs! Gotta love 'em
Bwaahaha. A "T party"
This was awesome. You still rock, man. Keep on rocking
Some Corrections:
> It's been a couple while since I was here.
a couple while?
> to whether I would accept it if he offered, my mind was too occupied
That comma after "if he offered" should be a semicolon.
> Besides that boredom was easily countered
Comma behind "besides".
> Suddenly, Screwball popped in front of us, grinning wildly.
You kinda never mentioned her name before this. Click shouldn't know it yet. Fix that!
> especially ¬¬¬that bastard Deadshot Calamity...
What's with the ¬¬¬?
> What that thing does is basically sends out a kind of spell
is basically [send] out
Oh right, forgot about this...
"When it rained bagels, that's free food for everypony! Radioactive coyotes can be seen glowing from a mile away, you'll be able to see them coming and escape them easier! The one who was selling Dash and Mint-als: Hello! Chems are bad! Everything the cultists have done has been helpful somehow!"
You forgot to add him asking how many STDs the ex-slut had been happily spreading around
2736598 Thanks again for the critique! Glad you liked it. I gotta keep watching some of those errors. They always pop up when I try to change lines. As for those weird L thingies though... I don't know where those were, or even what the fudge they are. Creepy.
Witty humor and references galore! I had to stop reading multiple times to get rid of the giggles.
2743391 Glad to hear it! The harder it is to read something, the better... or something.
2951857 You're welcome :D
3085854 It gets even better ;3
3093142 Yay! I did stuff right!
So far, I'm only 20 minutes and 21 seconds into the Text to Speech reading of this chapter, (Last line read: "You guys are free to go. I'll be at the town's hotel, Bishop, Knight, try to be there by tonight.") but as of reading, I can already tell I'm gonna like this chapter. It's silly right out the gate, and the radio ponies have been neat.
I'm on the radio: One of the cooler feelings from Fallout 3.
3111760 Glad you're liking it so far (next chapter's in the prereading stage ) I really should try doing some text-to speech reading, sometimes I just can't deal with a screen.
3112178
If you want to try Text to Speech of content on the web, I would recommend Soundgecko with Mary's voice since there's plugins to make it a one-click conversion process with links sent to email or mobile phone. Alternatively, you can send documents to Zamzar with the MP3 conversion selected, which reads it with AT&T Mike. Mike doesn't sound as natural as Mary a lot of the time, but he gets the job done.
For desktop software, I use Textaloud 3. Mary's voice (the same that SoundGecko uses) seems to belong to NeoSpeech and costs more than I'm willing to spend right now.
I like TtS since it helps prevent me from getting stuck in loops of reading the same paragraph dozens of times, and it's easy enough for me to get a stack of stories that sound neat, convert them all, and toss the stack of MP3s onto my smartphone to listen do during the daily commute. That's easily an hour daily of time I'd have spent with my mind wandering instead spent enjoying My Little Pony stories. Or blogs. Or whatever other text I tossed in that day.
(Youtube had an interactive transcript that would sync up video/audio playback with a text transcript of reading, as well as display subtitles on the video. That was a pretty neat trick.)