"with a quick levitation spell I threw him at her, horn first."
Unicorn javelin throwing as offensive technique... that is brilliant
"Now what are the chances of finding a random pair of abandoned pre-apocalypse glasses that were not only a perfect fit for my head, but also exactly the kind I needed for my eyesight?"
The answer: Discord
"(I can’t tell you how I managed to combine two machetes into a better one, it’s a trade secret.)"
Don't question it!
"except this time she brought the camera with her, severing it from its connection to the wall."
...this is a Portal reference, isn't it? Indestructible cameras, severed with teleporting tricks
My prereaders have taken to calling me "Murderer"
Seriously? This is Fallout: Equestria. Any funny stuff and sweet moment is just a temporary relief from the cold, hard truth of the Wasteland. I found this really heartwrenching, but I realize all too well events like this just need to be there to be true to the source material... to show people what the Wasteland is really like, and how easily it breaks people. Click seems to have a really, really dark side in him, and it's not buried as far as I'd expected, either
Stay true, stay classy, and stay funny, ClickClack. This chapter was amazing.
Corrections: > and charge 50 caps each let people through "50 caps each [to] let people through" > looking just as confidant as Chess Should be "confident". "Confidant" is a person you confide in, not an adjective. > The Winksteppers went raider us "went raider [on] us" > As the last notes of an angry, guitar heavy song finally faded away, a voice spoke up Missing period behind this. > keeping the third one from my latest victim on hand on HOOF, silly! > So… You’re on my side I take it? An ellipsis acts equivalent to a comma, so no capital letter after that. > I swallowed fearfully and asked Missing space after this > I twisted the glass around, "You only care about This should have a period instead of that comma.
Mixed feelings about Baltimare chapter. But now I keep imagining Knight a strange mix of Blackjack, Officer Cherry 'n Berries, and a living chess piece, and that is an amusing mental image. There two or three parts where I was wondering why everyone was shouting at each other instead of attacking mid-speech, but I suppose that's also a common happening in TV shows and movies too.
It's neat that there's some actiony stuff going on though. Nothing particularly notable comes to mind. Which also means I was entertained for the bulk of it, and nothing was horribly offensive. On to the next! Tomorrow. Maybe.
3918337 In case you hadn't noticed... the original story of Fallout: Equestria is simply a lot darker than the original games. In fact, the games, overall, seem to be really tongue-in-cheek with just about everything.
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Congratulations! Welcome to the club! We have refreshments on the table in the back: punch, soda, orphan tears, etc.
... I have no idea who that is in that picture, by the way.
Unicorn javelin throwing as offensive technique... that is brilliant
The answer: Discord
Don't question it!
...this is a Portal reference, isn't it? Indestructible cameras, severed with teleporting tricks
Seriously? This is Fallout: Equestria. Any funny stuff and sweet moment is just a temporary relief from the cold, hard truth of the Wasteland. I found this really heartwrenching, but I realize all too well events like this just need to be there to be true to the source material... to show people what the Wasteland is really like, and how easily it breaks people. Click seems to have a really, really dark side in him, and it's not buried as far as I'd expected, either
Stay true, stay classy, and stay funny, ClickClack. This chapter was amazing.
Corrections:
> and charge 50 caps each let people through
"50 caps each [to] let people through"
> looking just as confidant as Chess
Should be "confident". "Confidant" is a person you confide in, not an adjective.
> The Winksteppers went raider us
"went raider [on] us"
> As the last notes of an angry, guitar heavy song finally faded away, a voice spoke up
Missing period behind this.
> keeping the third one from my latest victim on hand
on HOOF, silly!
> So… You’re on my side I take it?
An ellipsis acts equivalent to a comma, so no capital letter after that.
> I swallowed fearfully and asked
Missing space after this
> I twisted the glass around, "You only care about
This should have a period instead of that comma.
Mixed feelings about Baltimare chapter. But now I keep imagining Knight a strange mix of Blackjack, Officer Cherry 'n Berries, and a living chess piece, and that is an amusing mental image. There two or three parts where I was wondering why everyone was shouting at each other instead of attacking mid-speech, but I suppose that's also a common happening in TV shows and movies too.
It's neat that there's some actiony stuff going on though. Nothing particularly notable comes to mind. Which also means I was entertained for the bulk of it, and nothing was horribly offensive. On to the next! Tomorrow. Maybe.
2628998 Seriously? This is Fallout: Equestria. Any funny stuff and sweet moment is just a temporary relief from the cold, hard truth of the Wasteland.
Maybe it's just me but this Wasteland seems A LOT darker than even the original Fallout series.
I never had a problem keeping my companions alive.
3918337
In case you hadn't noticed... the original story of Fallout: Equestria is simply a lot darker than the original games. In fact, the games, overall, seem to be really tongue-in-cheek with just about everything.