Act 1: All Scootaloo wanted was to fly. She imagined herself as a stunt flyer, powerful and daring.
This is the story of how she chased that dream, and of how her friends and mentors helped her along the way.
| Note: This is a "tragedy" in the classical sense--it starts nice, then steadily builds conflict, and the climax is at the very end. Each act will be released as a chapter.
Oh Scootaloo, why do you always seem to get the tragic/sad stories?
This is very well written, I can really place myself in Scoot's hooves. The only think that threw me out of it was you actually writing [Break]. It's not something you have to change, it just threw me off kilter for a second. I will be waiting for more.
keep going keep going id like to see where this goes
You have captured my interest, and I look forward to the second act.
Dang. That said...
DISCIPLINE, Tactical- jes' because you are writin' for the hot-fic sidebar and gettin' shoutouts from Seattle's Angels doesn't mean you shouldn't have discipline.
Her name's Cheerilee. If you wanna write fics about her cherri-lee you wouldn't be the first (and I'd prob'ly read them with great interest) but just as I went through my own fics once and changed a mess of 'BonBon's and 'Bon-Bon's to Bon Bons, you have some revising to do...
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whoa for real?
Wow, I've never had it right this whole time. Though I feel like Apple Bloom has pronounced it that way at least once.
And you're lucky I settled on Apple Bloom instead of being tempted to write Applebloom.
Holy shit..SOMEONE SAVE HER.