The Ancient Heart's First Beating

Tell me the story, Celestia. The one that you promised you would, so long ago...

This is the beginning of a story.

This is the end of a story.

This is a story about beginnings and endings, about gods and mortals, about love and death.

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InsufferableUnicorn

InsufferableUnicorn #1 · Sep 18th, 2012 · 1 · ·

mfw this fic has so few views and so few likes:

I personally love this sweet little thing; keep up the excellent work, Tactical!

TacticalRainboom

TacticalRainboom #2 · Sep 18th, 2012 · · ·

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I haven't sent it to Fimfic's front page yet.

You'll see why.

DJ-Pon3FTW

DJ-Pon3FTW #3 · Oct 9th, 2012 · 1 · ·

So many feels... I like it...

Darth Sparkle

Darth Sparkle #4 · Oct 9th, 2012 · · ·

If it's a Tacie story....You know it's gonna be a good one! I will read this in a bit...got a ton of other shit going down right now.....plus the sad tag makes me apprehensive as I am borderline suicidal as it is

TacticalRainboom

TacticalRainboom #5 · Oct 9th, 2012 · 1 · ·

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This isn't primarily a sad story. I feel like I want to add that as an author's note somewhere. This little thing really has a lot of positive energy and beauty--no tragedy, and no despair.

Darth Sparkle

Darth Sparkle #6 · Oct 9th, 2012 · 1 · ·

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Thats cool........ Still pry be a good idea to stick to the upbeat, rainbow puke, happy stories for now. It wouldn't take much to send me over to the dark side......Is pry a good thing I'm not that cowardly to actually off my self....but....how many have said that, then ended up on a ledge somewhere.......best not risk it....lol....but I wont be so afraid to check it now.....

Cirrus Sky

Cirrus Sky #7 · Oct 9th, 2012 · 1 · ·

It was... beautiful.

Applejinx

Applejinx #8 · Oct 9th, 2012 · 2 · ·

*silent for a little while*
Still very beautiful and powerful in a way I can't entirely explain...
Thank you for allowing this story to enter the world

Baron

Baron #9 · Oct 12th, 2012 · 1 · ·

I like it. Except for the whole part about Cadence dying...

Safireix

Safireix #10 · Oct 20th, 2012 · 2 · ·

I actually had a moment at the end there where my eyes went all prickly and I thought I was going to cry... it's a very rare story that can do that to me.
A very powerful piece, somehow both happy and sad at the same time. Love it.

Eustatian Wings

Eustatian Wings #11 · Nov 15th, 2012 · · ·

I'm mostly speechless, but I'll try anyway.

This story is pure fanon-fodder and it did a better job writing its subject into the story than canon did. Bravissimo.

Hodgepodge

Hodgepodge #12 · Nov 29th, 2012 · 1 · ·

WAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW

Pearple Prose

Pearple Prose #13 · Feb 21st, 2014 · 1 · ·

This is fantastic!

SirTruffles

SirTruffles #14 · Apr 8th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Wow, you really cleaned this up since the last time I saw it. You've definitely earned this:
i.imgur.com/6MrWqNZ.png

I'll also put this fic into consideration for the TL featured fic of the week. Excellent work.

TacticalRainboom

TacticalRainboom #15 · Apr 8th, 2014 · · ·

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I have no idea when I last revisited this thing. Apparently one of those times involved sweeping for errors. Glad you like it! The only reason it's not on EQD is because Vimbert hated it (for legitimate reasons).

SPark