When she cries, it rains in the Everfree.
I'm eighteen, I'm in OPP, I live the thug life, I smoke weed every day, I don't take shit from nobody, and I write fanfiction for a show about magical ponies.
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It's a spiral from sad to tragic with some insanity thrown in. I don't even know why, Fubbles told me to, so I just pulled up Open Office and started writing. Meh, tell me what you all think.
"in-winnable fight" should be "un-winnable fight"
"One the forest floor," should be "On the forest floor,"
Pretty well written, has some nice punch. The tomb stone might be a bit wordy though.
1625147 Thanks for the reply! Yeah, I asked a couple of my friends to proof read, I guess this is what I get.
1625363 You're face is beautiful Armalite, may it never change.
1628108 My swiss army knees only serve to shine my eyes.