• Member Since 4th Nov, 2012
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mariepam198


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As long as I could remember I have lived to serve my benevolent masters and have always been known as number 198. My life is filled with only one purpose to feed my queen and her many servants with my bothersome emotions. I can't imagine a life without my purpose and with emotions untill one day I meet a newcomer who makes me feel something I have long forgot about love. But, isin't love another one of those bothersome emotions that only hurt in the end?

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Idea's good, but grammar needs work. A lot of work.

I would edit any future chapters you post...

Actually, if you need an editor, just send me a PM

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TNX for the offer CplHenderson :pinkiehappy:. I really do need an editor , because as you can see I suck at grammer. Once I finish the next chapter I will pm you if you still want to edit the chapter I plan on posting :raritystarry:.

Woo first dibs on my own story comments list yayz for me :pinkiehappy:

Well this is the newest chapter sorry it took so long I have been very busy with school lately and after school activities. :raritywink:

Also before I forget I should give special thanks to my amzing editor CplHenderson for putting up with me not much ppl can do that in this world :rainbowkiss: he has been great .

If you have any comments , constructive critisim, etc then post it on the comments and I will be sure to hear you out and take your advice ranting is also acceptable :scootangel:

Two years ago?! What has Celestia been doing?! There isn't yet a hint of anything coming to help...
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I suppose Celestia by now would either have admitted eventually that she cannot rescue (all) the foalnapped ponies... or made a statement that the "foalnapped" hadn't actually been ponies at all. :fluttershysad: Both are rather... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_gasp.png

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Not even the great and powerful Celestia can help save everypony. :applecry:

Also lately with the newer threats to Equestria she would probbaly be either too busy to help the captured ponies or she has given them up for dead and has moved on to more pressing matters such as the saving the Crystal Empire :ajsleepy:

It dosen't mean that Celestia dosen't care for her subjects it just means that she can't help them anymore

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