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A young Drone Controller named Cy from Cryteria, one of the nations bordering Equestira, is sent with his unit to a small base in a town called Ponyville because of the raising tension between the two superpowers. After a incident happens on the base Celestia forces Cy to attend the prestigous Ponyville Academy, where her protege Twilight Sparkle could keep an extra eye on him.

Humanized Story

Chapters (7)
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Okay, very nice world building... But the exposition seems very forced and sudden. Why are they discussing that right before a firefight? Is there going to be an exam later on?

1729519 Call it foreshadowing and a way to show the world that the story is set in. It will be explained later on

Shouldn't the spelling be Uncontrollable?

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