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arandompenguin


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I just wanted to expand on what Spike saw when he looked through King Sombra's door. Also, I was bored. (And I may have been procrastinating)

Well, procrastinating or not, a good read here. Pretty much what most people think Spike's vision was, me included. :moustache:

Nice idea for a fic.

This is great! :twilightsmile:

CIA

this is what i'd expect from that part of the episode.
Spike gets more recognition! Hell yea!!!

Nice Lewis Carroll reference with the title, there. :twilightsmile:

1602810 Thanks, I only thought it up as I was submitting it.

And what horrifying things could Doctor Whooves see in that door?
"Of course. Who else?"

Fills the little hole just perfect, Thanks.

1604536 Probably every living thing he's ever managed to tick off, but espically the Daleks. :eeyup:

1611035 Or himself going into Hulk mode.

1615199 Why would THAT be his worst fear? :applejackunsure:

*eyes widen* Oh man if that's the reference I THINK it is, I don't have a choice: I NEED to read this.

EDIT after reading: Not as surreal as I was hoping, but I still like the reference made up there. Nice diction. Pretty straightforward, a few things were worded a bit awkwardly, but nothing too bad. The only really glaring bit was the end when it says

nuzzled herself against

. It just sounds really odd. I'd take out both 'herself' and 'against'. Overall, good work.

1906005 What reference are you referring to? (referenception)

1906034 Title + description = one half of favorite book. :pinkiehappy:

1906005 Thanks for reading. I only came up with that reference once I was about to submit and it clicked in my mind that that would be a cool reference. Also, I'll fix that line once I have access to a computer.

When I first saw that door move away from Twilight the first thing I thought of was 'imagine if bathroom doors did that'

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