The Apple Diary

Howdy yall. Ah would like to share with yall somethin that i've never told anypony. Yall will be the first so i hope yall enjoy.
~First-Time Story~

Special thanks to Psicosis for the big help on the editing.

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Systemfail

Systemfail #1 · Nov 2nd, 2012 · · ·

I'm intrigued.... I SMELL A FRONT-PAGER, JUST FROM THE DESCRIPTION.

SuperGiantRobot

SuperGiantRobot #2 · Nov 2nd, 2012 · · ·

One minor detail: she wouldn't write with an accent...

VampWolf

VampWolf #3 · Nov 2nd, 2012 · · ·

1548005
This is true but i was trying to stay in character. Tho i may have tried to hard :/ Sorry bout that next time I will get it right :)
1547942 :D

Jewel_Eater_Dragon

Jewel_Eater_Dragon #4 · Nov 2nd, 2012 · · ·

What a sad yet beautiful way to explain AppleJack's can't lie quality.
Personally, I think there were a couple of mistakes there... somewhere, but I'm too lazy to point it out.
All in all, it was pretty good.

VampWolf

VampWolf #5 · Nov 2nd, 2012 · · ·

1548615 Thanks a lot and it is a first time so next time i'll get it right

HighCutman

HighCutman #6 · Nov 2nd, 2012 · · ·

sad histoy bro..
anyways i like it
man i was expectating big mac murder someone

VampWolf

VampWolf #7 · Nov 13th, 2012 · · ·

Well it's officially been a long while since posting this and i would like to thank everyone who liked it. Hopefully the like rating will go up soon but i'm okay wiht waiting :D once again thanks everyone who read and liked it