The story of the everyday life of a human hired by mares to provide comfort for their needs, all the while exploring Equestrian life through the eyes of his customers. Set in the Gentlemanverse.
Hmmm, how to know when I've watched too much Doctor Who this week: I read the series of whats at the end in David Tennant's voice.
Seriously though, great chapter. The scene with Sea Swirl left me feeling a bit sour, but it's for the best that they didn't reconcile. Makes for more believable drama.
I can only presume you mean that Eve probably doesn't end up with Harry.
Just saying, don't let my opinions dictate how you want your story to be told. I prefer a satisfactory ending for all parties in a story, but obviously that doesn't always happen.
Another amazing chapter as always. The best is here:
“And when you grow old, when you are useless, you’ll realize that!” Sea Swirl shouted. “You’re going to be alone for the rest of your miserable life! That is what you deserve, faker! You hear me, you deceiver, you liar!? In the end, you’re going to be alone!”
Before I could stop myself, I snarled out these words: “A misborn would know, wouldn’t she?”
“Harry,” I heard her whisper then sigh. “I wish I was the mare that would challenge you.”
Huh? Wait a minute...
I felt her kiss me on the nape of my neck and electricity traveled downwards through my spine.
“I wish you could see me more than just a friend,” she continued.
2877291 His boss? Nah I don't think so, question the other fics establish that but in your story there is going to be herds? Because let me tell you if he can catch a princess Eve will have a heart attack I can see it coming
XD Herds still apply, yes. But then again, when it comes to inter-species romance, its all about give and take. Will Harry be comfortable in a Herd situation? Or is Eve, who is shown to dislike Equestrian Culture be the one that says "let's not do a herd"?
2877326 Oh I see your point, I think I can picture the end of that argument with screw Equestria and Earth, lets do whatever we like and we are fell comfortable, it someone appear that want him and she approve lets her join if a mare find interest in Eve Harry will escort her to the nearest mental instituted.
Oh nice... the typical harem comedy syndrome where the guy doesn't get that the girls around him go CRAZY for him. To quote Lyra Heartstings from my story:
Sometimes human males just don’t get it…
But now he knows... And now the cards are mixed anew. He could have go on normally before hearing this, now he has a bad conscience every time she picks him up after a job... OR... And that would be funny as hell, he tries to provoke some reactions from her once in a while. I mean her hand of cards is in the open, he could bluff like hell now and play his cards a bit more risky. But we will see if he's a player, a gentleman or just an idiot.
2877431 Good, good, you know after this chapter I sort of wanted that he will meet the other human, the one that impregnate Celestia, I bet he can share some words of wisdom to him, and honestly that dude deserve some hi 5, marry with 3 mares?, all ok with him be a Gentlemen?, becoming a duke? He can be the yoda of your story, the only thing missing is him specking backwards
Got get him, Eve!
OH BOY! She finally has the courage to admit her feelings. MOAR AUTHOR! Give us more of your beautiful story and we'll keep coming back!
NUUUUUUuuuuuuuu.......!
Not Sea Swirl... Not like that...
Gah!
Sounds like Eve and Sea Swirl might have a little chat at some point.
P.S. Nice update just as I was thinking about doing homework. It's not like I wanted to do anything productive tonight anyways.
Oh damn, Fuck Sea Swirl, Go Eve!
I keep trying to find a sound byte that says "Evah?" from Wall-E, but I can't seem to locate one.
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Guys, spoilers!
Kidding. XD Glad you guys enjoyed that.
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Who knows. Maybe they'll meet one day.
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lol.
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Oh, damn. You reminded me of Wall-E. Now I want to watch it.
No clop? So what!
Still good as usual.
Facedesking at the last scene. Life never lets` up for some characters.
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Thanks.
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Why would life let up for them? They deserve to suffer!
Moving chapter, and now I would like some more please Mr Demon?
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Please?...
It's about bucking time you got him to this point and to finally have Eve open up.
Come on Harry. YOU CAN DO IT...
Finally, Eve makes a move.
Sorry, just had to say it.
Ah, glorious.
I like Thomas. He's nice and smart.
I like Harry. He's... nice.
But Oh My God Harry, how can anyone be so dense?! During their conversation, all throughout I felt like- like-
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Yeah. Like that.
2877135 It's the infamous reverse friendzone.
He friendzoned her
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go for eve harry you do it. if you can say will harry and eve get together? I'm curious.
Oh shit, what you gonna do Harry? Your best friend is in love with your ape ass! I'm loving all the conflict that's going on in this story.
YES, I was really hoping it was going to end with Eve, but what about that scene with one of the Mane 6? Is that still going to happen?
Drama bomb!!!
Hmmm, how to know when I've watched too much Doctor Who this week: I read the series of whats at the end in David Tennant's voice.
Seriously though, great chapter. The scene with Sea Swirl left me feeling a bit sour, but it's for the best that they didn't reconcile. Makes for more believable drama.
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I'm writing a Feathered Heart chapter for now, but rest assured, I'll be alternating back and forth, not like the last time.
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Man, you guys are so going to hate me. XD
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Hehe. Glad you find it glorious.
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That's Harry for you. XD Or maybe its something else. I kinda left a clue during the conversation.
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Very odd to see a guy do it, eh?
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I can only presume you mean that Eve probably doesn't end up with Harry.
Just saying, don't let my opinions dictate how you want your story to be told. I prefer a satisfactory ending for all parties in a story, but obviously that doesn't always happen.
Another amazing chapter as always. The best is here:
Sweet baby Jesus how can he be so FUCKIN DENSE!?
I fucking knew it.
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Can't say... but chances are better than Harry and Sea Swirl, that much I can say. XD
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XD I can hear some people saying:
Finally! Conflict! Has arrived! To Gentleman for Mares!
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Ah, well... that'll spoil the story. XD But yes, it'll still happen.
Clue: Remember the circumstances and the way Eve admitted her feelings.
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I wish someone would make a gif for that. Like this:
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Yeah. I know people asked for Harry and Sea Swirl, but... Eve kinda points why it won't work.
Lets see, a mare more closer than he think?…Hmm…of course Eve is referring to Princess Luna is so obvious, why I didn't catch it?
YOUR ALI~VE!!! *sob* you're alive...
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Nah. XD I'm just saying things won't be as fast as you guys think.
But then again, yeah, it probably won't happen. Who knows?
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Haha! No one linked me Adventure Time before. Or Pulp fiction either I think. Did I just earn a trophy/achievement?
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Obviously. XD
No, wait, wait. Its Platinum! XD
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Sorry about the delay.
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Huh? Oh, sorry; didn't see you there. I was talking to the story.
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Yeah, my fault. Story wanted to be there a week earlier. Told her to get out of her hobo dress and wait for the style consultant.
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His boss? Nah I don't think so, question the other fics establish that but in your story there is going to be herds? Because let me tell you if he can catch a princess Eve will have a heart attack I can see it coming
Aaaaand there it is.
I don't know if he's screwed, really lucky, or both.
I'm thinking option C.
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XD Herds still apply, yes. But then again, when it comes to inter-species romance, its all about give and take. Will Harry be comfortable in a Herd situation? Or is Eve, who is shown to dislike Equestrian Culture be the one that says "let's not do a herd"?
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C is the safe bet.
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I love how this chapter ends, and I have to see more. Fantastically done.
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Oh I see your point, I think I can picture the end of that argument with screw Equestria and Earth, lets do whatever we like and we are fell comfortable, it someone appear that want him and she approve lets her join if a mare find interest in Eve Harry will escort her to the nearest mental instituted.
As you can see, that is what Harry could said
Sea Bitch move the fuck out of the way Eve is claiming your old territory. Oh ya by the way nicely done with the chapter.
Oh nice... the typical harem comedy syndrome where the guy doesn't get that the girls around him go CRAZY for him.
To quote Lyra Heartstings from my story:
But now he knows... And now the cards are mixed anew. He could have go on normally before hearing this, now he has a bad conscience every time she picks him up after a job...
OR... And that would be funny as hell, he tries to provoke some reactions from her once in a while. I mean her hand of cards is in the open, he could bluff like hell now and play his cards a bit more risky. But we will see if he's a player, a gentleman or just an idiot.
Nice, an update, let's see what we got. ^_^
Pffft. At least Eve have moved her flank to do it. Dude is sometimes doofus like hell.
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>.> I always thought liquid pride was...
XD Sexy time next chapter, yes.
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XD Rule of Three.
And Laharl... don't explain the joke. XD
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Man its like no one cares about spoilers anymore. XD XD
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Yup. That's when culture clash comes in. Things are now more personal.
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Enjoy
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Well, a little liquid courage tends to go a long way.
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Oh I just remember Rarity, did she will send a request in the next chapter?
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She already sent her request. But you know, with Harry being on leave and all. We'll see.
dis chapter........
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Good, good, you know after this chapter I sort of wanted that he will meet the other human, the one that impregnate Celestia, I bet he can share some words of wisdom to him, and honestly that dude deserve some hi 5, marry with 3 mares?, all ok with him be a Gentlemen?, becoming a duke? He can be the yoda of your story, the only thing missing is him specking backwards
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Hehe. Yeah. We need more sexy time, yes?
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>.> Uh... haven't heard about the whole human impregnating Celestia thing.
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Ceck it out his story is a Gentlemen Journey, last chapter "by royal command" You will see of what I'm talking about