The story of the everyday life of a human hired by mares to provide comfort for their needs, all the while exploring Equestrian life through the eyes of his customers. Set in the Gentlemanverse.
Part one is complete. Part two is still on the process of being written. As always, I hope you guys enjoy the chapter, and let me point out one thing here:
With the Gentlemen for Mares and other companies alike already in place...
That is an invitation of anyone interested in making a story set in this universe. It doesn't have to involve human escorts of different companies or anything, though. I just wanted to point out that humans are basically in Equestria, each with their own adventures. If you like the setting, please, feel free to base a story around it.
I'd normally ask you credit me or something, but I'll leave that up to you. What I really want is a link of your story so I can read your interpretation.
GRRR! New chapter in this story and the one my Fimbulvinter. Which to read first? Read at the library tomorrow or at school in the morning? Why must you guys do this to me? Oh, Demon eyes, got something to tell you: GET READY TO FACE THE WRATH OF THE "MEN AND MARES" COMPANY! MWHAHAHAHAHAHA! THAT'S RIGHT, MINE SHALL COME TO FRUITITION SOON! I have an idea, we should have the two meet in one chapter and get into a fight of some sort and then your guy almost loses his job over it. Good idea or bad idea?
Uh, I have no idea how that would work out though, as the only who can really fire a Gentleman is Platinum Corona. lol. The plot sounds vaguely Japanese-anime like.
Normally I like to leave comments with either some modicum of humor or wit, or even the merest correction; however, I find myself in the awkward position of being brain dead; therefore, consider this a comment of general approval and I eagerly await your next installment.
I need to make some sort of image that I can copy-paste at times like this-when I want to show approval and get those numbers (likes, favs and comments) higher.
I love the way you right this, you could skip all the sex and I would be just as hooked. I can see why you would open this up to others, your world building skills are excellent. The second you had Rarity, AJ, and Wingman meet up, I knew Rarity would know what a Gentleman meant. Little weird that she would drop from only wanting royalty to "the classiest, most considerate, and customer oriented escort-for-hire" it seems a little funny but I can see it. Great job and good work. -Sturrn
Oh, God, I actually did not want to write Rarity knowing. It may have made it look like she was. . . well, you know. But I think it worked out. So far.
1714790 A job well done then, she appeared more informed than well... yeah. Honestly though I'm on edge with having a Rarity chapter because that always seems to open the gateway for the rest of the elements. (at least in other stories.) I have a lot of confidence that won't happen though, this seems like a story that has a track that won't swerve in that direction. (of including the other elements, Rarity maybe but hmm...)
I know what you mean. Its either Rarity, Pinkie or Flutters.
I can promise, if it will swerve that way, it won't be anytime soon. But I will say this, the meeting with Rarity is actually the first anchor, because he'll be meeting a bit more ponies in Ponyville. You can say she may have been a gateway, but not for the Mane Six.
“Now, when the time comes, remember Harry. . . Eve” – she pointed at herself with her hoof, and then pointed it to the dish – “food. Platinum. . . customer in heat.”
This made my day, I could not stop laughing for a good five minutes at that image in my brain. Glad to see this story continuing to evolve, it's always awesome to see any sort of clopfic that has plot in addition to plot. I'm terrible for that I know.
I was going to say something Anti-clop, then I remembered I wouldn't have even seen this if I left Mature off. So never mind. Enjoy your guilty pleasures
mares who didn’t want to get foals would use something akin to a dildo pump. It’s a phallic tool made of materials that supposedly felt like a real stallion’s, and would pump out a mixture with the consistency of male discharge
Hm, I feel like I've seen this in another fanfic . . .
Yes! Cheerilee is gonna get not one but TWO chapters in a row! Best teacher doesn't deserve any less, kind sir.
Although now I'm wondering what the human females are doing about this whole Equestria thing. I mean, a lot of guys migrated from earth to Equestria to become man whores for mare so wouldn't that affect the human population on earth or . . .? I gotta stop overthinking this.
I was very interested with the news paper scene. I can see some right wing nut job going on a on about how ponies are the devil and that humanity must cut ties and blah, blah, blah... I'm a Christian by the way and even I think those guys are really stupid and very un-Christian like. The Duchess part raised my eyebrows a bit too. I can see her becoming a problem... good lord I can see her kidnapping humans to experiment on them so that humans and ponies can reproduce. I need to bleach my brain now. The part about Blueblood funny.
Anyway, I like the fact that this isn't just a straight up clop flick and that there is a story behind it and I can't wait for the next chapter.
1715398 Ah yes Xenophilia best HiE fic out there hell, if you're gonna take anything from another HiE fic it better be that one although now it kind of makes me wonder why there don't seem to be herds in this one and since this doesn't have a romance tag our little man whore isn't gonna I don't know get attached to anypony?
Anyway, there are mentions of herds, like last chapter. Trixie talked about her family and so. I may add more than a passing mention in the future, but for now, yeah, there are herds.
Possible romance... not sure between Wingman and Cheerilee, but it'd be funny if Eve came on the third day and wanted a threesome... (troll chapter) Not that it should happen... We must wait for the plot to thicken... Eve should hire Wingman for herself in the middle-end of the story, and that would be where Wingman discovers the love interest between all the mares he met.
No need to hire him. Job perk of being a handler means she can make sure if he's physically fit for duty. And they have loose rules on how that is interpreted. xD
Who else got a sense of this Duchess Emerald being in the 'humie' closet? Seriously, I was waiting for her to say something like "even if we have the urge we shouldn't act on it" or "I overcame my own attraction" or "they're so filthy and wild" while going on about their strong hands, their predatory fierceness and their incredible, incredibly stamina. She sounded exactly like those anti-gay politicians who get caught with another man. And her breeding plan... Oh jeez. I'm curious about her porn folder now.
She should hook up with Senator Rowan. They could tempt each other and leave the rest of both their races alone.
Also, this Blueblood liking Iron Man thing - that wouldn't be a reference to another fic..?
Seriously, I was waiting for her to say something like "even if we have the urge we shouldn't act on it" or "I overcame my own attraction" or "they're so filthy and wild" while going on about their strong hands, their predatory fierceness and their incredible, incredibly stamina. She sounded exactly like those anti-gay politicians who get caught with another man.
You made me remember a certain scene in Rock of Ages, with the whole 'We Built This City/We're Not Going To Take It Anymore',
And her breeding plan... Oh jeez. I'm curious about her porn folder now.
If she had, prolly the normal stuff. Like Griffins, Dragons, Diamond Dogs, Zebras, complete with subgenres and other normal stuff like stallion-dom, maredom, hoof fetish, horn manipulations and the like.
She should hook up with Senator Rowan. They could tempt each other and leave the rest of both their races alone.
Wouldn't that start the Armageddon? XD
Also, this Blueblood liking Iron Man thing - that wouldn't be a reference to another fic..?
*whistles innocently* I have no idea what you mean. I certainly cannot confirm I'm referencing to another fic. Nor am I completely sure it was written by me. xD xD
A clopfic with plot that makes sense and is both interesting and thought-provoking? (its why i like HiE fics, culture clash/shock is always interesting to explore)
AUTHOR'S NOTES:
Part one is complete. Part two is still on the process of being written. As always, I hope you guys enjoy the chapter, and let me point out one thing here:
That is an invitation of anyone interested in making a story set in this universe. It doesn't have to involve human escorts of different companies or anything, though. I just wanted to point out that humans are basically in Equestria, each with their own adventures. If you like the setting, please, feel free to base a story around it.
I'd normally ask you credit me or something, but I'll leave that up to you. What I really want is a link of your story so I can read your interpretation.
Take care, guys. And happy reading.
EDITED
Yes. Now it's time to read it.
1714523
I think you accidentally a word
1714552
It says a lot that I need you to proof-read my comments.
I think I'm just really sleepy.
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Enjoy man.
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HOW DID YOU GET HERE BEFORE ME!?!??!
Anywho, YAY! New chappy!
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coandco's a given. He, like, knows when its gonna be posted.
>.> Buck Rogers.... he sounds like Captain America. can't beat that.
1714571 Another great chapter.
1714624
That was fast.
Thank you for reading.
1714631 Started reading seconds after it went up
Very nice, and left me wanting for the next chapter.
GRRR! New chapter in this story and the one my Fimbulvinter. Which to read first? Read at the library tomorrow or at school in the morning? Why must you guys do this to me? Oh, Demon eyes, got something to tell you: GET READY TO FACE THE WRATH OF THE "MEN AND MARES" COMPANY! MWHAHAHAHAHAHA! THAT'S RIGHT, MINE SHALL COME TO FRUITITION SOON! I have an idea, we should have the two meet in one chapter and get into a fight of some sort and then your guy almost loses his job over it. Good idea or bad idea?
1714646
Wow. Psychic? xD
1714678
Yeah, I'm still working on that. Glad you enjoyed it though.
1714704
Uh, I have no idea how that would work out though, as the only who can really fire a Gentleman is Platinum Corona. lol. The plot sounds vaguely Japanese-anime like.
Normally I like to leave comments with either some modicum of humor or wit, or even the merest correction; however, I find myself in the awkward position of being brain dead; therefore, consider this a comment of general approval and I eagerly await your next installment.
I need to make some sort of image that I can copy-paste at times like this-when I want to show approval and get those numbers (likes, favs and comments) higher.
Does estrus make nymphos out of real world horses too?
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Thanks. ^_^ Glad you enjoyed it.
1714733
I don't think so. Sure, they tend to get a little rowdy and ready for some action, but they don't suddenly become nymphos.
But don't think I am actually completely sure. Better ask someone who takes care of them for the real facts.
The more you know....
I love the way you right this, you could skip all the sex and I would be just as hooked.
I can see why you would open this up to others, your world building skills are excellent.
The second you had Rarity, AJ, and Wingman meet up, I knew Rarity would know what a Gentleman meant. Little weird that she would drop from only wanting royalty to "the classiest, most considerate, and customer oriented escort-for-hire" it seems a little funny but I can see it.
Great job and good work.
-Sturrn
>Pink coated tyrant,
>Pinkie out of ponyville.
>Somethings going on.
1714767
Oh, God, I actually did not want to write Rarity knowing. It may have made it look like she was. . . well, you know. But I think it worked out. So far.
1714774
LMAO! That's a nice way to look at it. xD
1714790
A job well done then, she appeared more informed than well... yeah.
Honestly though I'm on edge with having a Rarity chapter because that always seems to open the gateway for the rest of the elements. (at least in other stories.)
I have a lot of confidence that won't happen though, this seems like a story that has a track that won't swerve in that direction. (of including the other elements, Rarity maybe but hmm...)
1714881
I know what you mean. Its either Rarity, Pinkie or Flutters.
I can promise, if it will swerve that way, it won't be anytime soon. But I will say this, the meeting with Rarity is actually the first anchor, because he'll be meeting a bit more ponies in Ponyville. You can say she may have been a gateway, but not for the Mane Six.
finally, another update
“Now, when the time comes, remember Harry. . . Eve” – she pointed at herself with her hoof, and then pointed it to the dish – “food. Platinum. . . customer in heat.”
This made my day, I could not stop laughing for a good five minutes at that image in my brain. Glad to see this story continuing to evolve, it's always awesome to see any sort of clopfic that has plot in addition to plot.
I'm terrible for that I know.
1714945
Enjoy your stay.
Anyways, guys, gotta go for a few. Later.
1714956
xD I liked Harry's reaction more, but I'm glad I made you laughed. ^_^
sweet celestia as alwas great work, i like the whole bloody thing
5 derps out of 5
I was going to say something Anti-clop, then I remembered I wouldn't have even seen this if I left Mature off. So never mind. Enjoy your guilty pleasures
Hm, I feel like I've seen this in another fanfic . . .
Yes! Cheerilee is gonna get not one but TWO chapters in a row!
Best teacher doesn't deserve any less, kind sir.
Although now I'm wondering what the human females are doing about this whole Equestria thing.
I mean, a lot of guys migrated from earth to Equestria to become man whores for mare
so wouldn't that affect the human population on earth or . . .?
I gotta stop overthinking this.
Very sexy.
Where's Regidar?
He's usually one of the first commenters on stories like this.
If this was just a sample of what's to come, HOLY SHIT!
Those vials are gonna be gone and he be needing more...
1715011
Holy crap. Rainbow Dash, have that one looked at!
1715074
Glad you do. ^_^
1715092
Um, thank you?
1715100
I can point out what fic. Its called Xenophilia, and something of an inspiration to this fic.
Can anyone say Lawyer-friendly Cameos? xD
As for the women, do remember that most humans that went to Equestria are either engineering or IT people. Not all of them are, you know, escorts.
1715234
Glad you do.
1715246
Thank you.
1715392
Heated mares are scary mares. xD
Whoo-hoooo!! Freaking awesome update as always! I do so love Harry's style and approach. I also can't wait for a Rarity chapter~
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It'll be a while. But, more Rarity appearance next chapter.
I was very interested with the news paper scene. I can see some right wing nut job going on a on about how ponies are the devil and that humanity must cut ties and blah, blah, blah... I'm a Christian by the way and even I think those guys are really stupid and very un-Christian like. The Duchess part raised my eyebrows a bit too. I can see her becoming a problem... good lord I can see her kidnapping humans to experiment on them so that humans and ponies can reproduce. I need to bleach my brain now. The part about Blueblood funny.
Anyway, I like the fact that this isn't just a straight up clop flick and that there is a story behind it and I can't wait for the next chapter.
1715398 Ah yes
Xenophilia
best HiE fic out there
hell, if you're gonna take anything from another HiE fic
it better be that one
although now it kind of makes me wonder why there
don't seem to be herds in this one
and since this doesn't have a romance tag
our little man whore isn't gonna
I don't know
get attached to anypony?
my thoughts of the mention of a potion combined with the chapter name made me think that they invented a potion to give men an artificial estrus cycle
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Maybe. ^_^ Hehehe... Who knows? XD
Anyway, there are mentions of herds, like last chapter. Trixie talked about her family and so. I may add more than a passing mention in the future, but for now, yeah, there are herds.
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I don't think that man who takes such potion will ever survive.
Rarity: a gentleman, who are you here for?
Wingman: YO MAMA!
Possible romance... not sure between Wingman and Cheerilee, but it'd be funny if Eve came on the third day and wanted a threesome... (troll chapter)
Not that it should happen... We must wait for the plot to thicken... Eve should hire Wingman for herself in the middle-end of the story, and that would be where Wingman discovers the love interest between all the mares he met.
1715745
Would Equestrians even understand the 'Yo Mama' jokes?
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No need to hire him. Job perk of being a handler means she can make sure if he's physically fit for duty. And they have loose rules on how that is interpreted. xD
Just kidding. Maybe.
Alright you guys, show of hands (or hoofs):
Who else got a sense of this Duchess Emerald being in the 'humie' closet?
Seriously, I was waiting for her to say something like "even if we have the urge we shouldn't act on it" or "I overcame my own attraction" or "they're so filthy and wild" while going on about their strong hands, their predatory fierceness and their incredible, incredibly stamina. She sounded exactly like those anti-gay politicians who get caught with another man. And her breeding plan... Oh jeez. I'm curious about her porn folder now.
She should hook up with Senator Rowan. They could tempt each other and leave the rest of both their races alone.
Also, this Blueblood liking Iron Man thing - that wouldn't be a reference to another fic..?
1715800 No, no, that's good. maybe you should do it while she's in heat
lol dafuq did I type?
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You made me remember a certain scene in Rock of Ages, with the whole 'We Built This City/We're Not Going To Take It Anymore',
If she had, prolly the normal stuff. Like Griffins, Dragons, Diamond Dogs, Zebras, complete with subgenres and other normal stuff like stallion-dom, maredom, hoof fetish, horn manipulations and the like.
Wouldn't that start the Armageddon? XD
*whistles innocently* I have no idea what you mean. I certainly cannot confirm I'm referencing to another fic. Nor am I completely sure it was written by me. xD xD
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I don't know man. You must be smelling an in-heat mare somewhere and you're being a bit affected by it. xD
1715867 I think it's me being still tired... but I'm too tired to sleep now... if that makes any sense
1715651 Sweeet~
1715883
Yeah it does. I felt the same way once. Its a stupid feeling.
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Rarity fan?
Pinkie, ... or Cadance?
1715922 It would suck if that were true, being affected by a mare in heat across a perpendicular dimension full of ponies in Equestria
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You'll find out. We meet the boss, Platinum Corona, after the Cheerilee arc.
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Just thank all that is good that not all mares get into the heat phase at once. If they did....
: They'd break the fourth wall.
A clopfic with plot that makes sense and is both interesting and thought-provoking? (its why i like HiE fics, culture clash/shock is always interesting to explore)
Yes please.