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AppleBucker22


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This is a story of survival. One day, when Equestria is caught up by a strange virus, the unaware ponies are infected. Can the main hero survive? Will he meet any new survivors? Who is behind all of this?

Find out here.

Big credits go to my friend Stephen Cleary, AKA Clearshot01 (check out his page, he's awesome), his 2 characters are also a huge part of the story (2 main characters), Hollow and Rising Knight.

Give me your opinions, tell me if I need to improve anything. Thanks!

Artwork is from the 20% cooler site, by the amazing artist, TerraForma

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 13 )

Zombies for the win! I know that feel to bro:yay:

this... this random discombobulated wonder. what is this place filled with so many WHAT THE FUCK DID I JUST READ

Allright. I just read a L4D2 crossover and fell in love with it. Am I going to read this?
HELL YES!

This is good keep up the good work. I never expected the father of applejack but its still a good story so far. :yay:

Very nice! :pinkiehappy: Tracked, and keep up the awesome work. I look forward to seeing where you go with this. :twilightsmile:

1540420>>1540298>>1540185>>1540048>>1540045 Thank you for all the supporting comments, they mean a lot!


Also, next chapters will include MORE ZOMPONIES!

YAY I love this type of story!

1540048 and hello!

EPIC! Man can't wait to see wht happens next.

Zombie apocolypse? What would happen if the zomies retained all their past life memories and didn't crave flesh all the time?

Good Fluttershy is all right. Please Don't Let a zombie get her.:yay:

This story has been reviewed by The Equestrian Critic Society.

Story Title: Dead On Your Hooves

Author: AppleBucker22

Reviewed By: TOOS0BER

Zombie apocalypse in Equestria: a great concept, no matter how many times it’s been done before, it is always worth a read for fans of this particular genre. AppleBucker22 just needs to take the speed down from eleven, and the detail up to ten. Some more depth needs to be added to the main character to help convey their true feelings. With some re-write, this story could really stand out as an epic drama, and even as a survival-horror that tastes so well with zombie jam.

Full Review

Score: 4.5/10

I think all that was a bit too much dude

Everything just seems too OP. It's a good story but it just... It's hard to follow at times. Most of the time the story flows nicely but at others it just veers off into a completely different direction. The grammar is pretty nice. Props on that. All these powers and now some tattoos? I reccomend that you slow it down a bit. This is just friendly advice. Have an awesome day!

-icudeadnow-
*Brohoof*

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