Rarity Rides A Roller Coaster

by Seanessy

Ride Of Your Life

The hustle and bustle of excitement generated from clusters of equines as they trotted about. A few ponies engorged themselves into the sugary sweets at a nearby cotton candy stand, others attempted to use their tactfulness and keen coordination to succeed at the various carnival games. The main attraction however, was the four-hundred and fifty six foot tall red and black streaked structure glimmering in the light. Screeches pierced the air as the coaster sliced across the track before speeding around a loop. The cross wind that followed blustered over the ponies forcing many of them to cover their faces while some horror stricken parents held their kids to keep them from tumbling over.

A growl emanated from Rarity’s throat as she restyled her mane for what seemed like the twentieth time. She put on her characteristic pout as she looked from the roller coaster, then to her cheerful southern bred friend. “Why did I allow you to drag me here again?”

Applejack flaunted a smug smile and gently nudged the snippy unicorn with a hoof. “Cause, sugarcube. Yer the only one who ain’t been on “The Mad Mustang” yet.”

The orange mare rolled her eyes as the sigh from Rarity indicated a complaint was about to be underway.

“And what, if I may ask again, is the big deal?”

A slight squeal left the unicorn’s mouth as the weight of another pony upon her caused her legs to buckle. Rarity glared as Pinkie Pie bounced up and down on her back beaming her usual bubbly smile.

“It’s the highest, fastest, speediest, zoomiest, wildest, craziest most funerific roller coaster in all of Equestria!” the pink pony shouted as she rocketed into the sky then landing in front of the white equine pushing her face into hers, “Uh, DUUUUUH!”

Rarity placed a hoof on the pink pony’s shoulder and gently pushed her off. She cleared her throat. “Yes, well, forgive me for not being so enthused if I don’t see the fun in standing in line all day for a ride that will not only last, two minutes, but also ruin my dazzling mane!”

As if on cue, another gust of cross wind showered over the ponies. Rarity bit her lower lip and her body shook as she, for another consecutive time, re-styled her mane to its accustomed bravura. Applejack and Pinkie Pie couldn’t help but share a laugh.

“Trust us, sugarcube. This ride, is more than worth it!”

“Yeah! After it’s over, you’ll wanna ride it again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and again, and aga-”

Pinkie continued muffling despite Rarity’s napkin covered hoof in her mouth.

“I highly doubt that, darling.”

Pinkie Pie chewed and swallowed the napkin as her unicorn pal lowered her hoof and gave her a repulsed glare. The pink pony licked her lips. “Mmmmm, not bad!”

“We’re up!” Applejack exclaimed as she took off her hat and stuffed it into the nearby square cubbies.

“YAAAAAAAY!” Pinkie Pie bellowed as she bounced her way to the front seat, “Who’s riding with me?!”

“That’d be me!” Applejack said plopping her rear into the seat next to her pink friend. She shot a condescending smug smile to Rarity, “unless Ms. Fussy Flank is scared and needs somepony to hold her hoof.”

Rarity shot back a bemused stare as she placed herself in the seat behind the two giggling earth ponies. As she rolled her eyes, a brown unicorn colt with a noodle string like black mane and tail and no cutie mark sat next to her.

He gave her a kind smile as his enthusiastic hazel eyes met hers. “Hi there.”

Rarity simply responded with a kind smile and a double eyebrow raise.

“Is this your first time on “The Mad Mustang”?”

“Yes, and my last.” the unicorn stated a tad loudly as she leaned forward ensuring her two friends heard her. The two earth ponies shrugged their shoulders and continued their snickering. Rarity sat back and met the brown unicorn’s gaze again. “They dragged me here.”

“Oh well, you’re in for a real treat… and if you do get scared… my hoof is available.”

Rarity’s left eye twitched a bit as she struggled to not give an unimpressed glare followed by a condescending laugh at the brown unicorn’s cheesy attempt at flirting. She instead smiled seductively and leaned in closer to the colt. “Yes, well, I could also use the handle bar…”

Before the brown colt could even contemplate her words, Rarity slammed the metal fastening bar down tightly against their laps. A high pitched squeak escaped his lips and he gave a nervous smile. Rarity simply raised an eyebrow as if silently saying: “Nice try”.

The teal colored ride operant pony came by to secure the safety of the entire cart. When satisfied, he raised a hoof to signal the fuchsia pony at the control board to start the ride. She turned a key, pulled down a couple of switches and hit a big green button.

The ride hissed and whirred as the gears began working in their normal pace to push the ride forward. The wheels began turning, slowly easing the cart out of the station and up along the track’s first drop.

Pinkie giggled and banged her hooves lightly against the handle bar as she felt the excitement began to build within her. She turned to Rarity. “This is gonna be so much FUN! You just wait!”

Rarity rolled her eyes again and she decided to cast a glance at the scenery as the cart pushed its way up the steep metal hill. As they climbed higher in altitude, a weird sensation began to grow in the pit of her stomach. Her throat went a little bit dry, her body felt a bit cold and her heart beat rose a bit. Her eyes widened as the coaster came to a stop at the peak of the hill. Rarity felt a few beads of sweat start to form underneath her skin.

“HERE WE GOOOOOOOO!” Pinkie Pie exclaimed as the coaster plunged down the hill.

The coaster began picking up speed as it snaked its way across the track, going over various smaller hills and shifting the ponies against each other as it made sharp left and right turns. Rarity did her best to swallow but she could barely close her mouth. The sensation in her stomach had tripled, and each bump, shake, and wiggle of the cart sent the feeling all throughout her body, stimulating all of her senses. When the coaster arrived at the loops, Rarity almost felt her eyes roll to the back of her head as the feeling seized up to her brain.

The unicorn desperately tried to hold onto the handle bar but her hooves and fore legs felt like jelly. As the coaster rounded another set of turns, a sharp tingle ran down Rarity’s spine. As it cascaded from her neck, it stopped at her pelvis and seemed to send a shockwave of pleasure throughout her entire lower body. Her legs quivered and she unwillingly let out a soft moan. As the coaster hit a few more loops and swerved upside down, the tingles throughout Rarity’s body increased causing her hips to buck and her legs to seize.

“Ah…ah…ahhhh!” were the only sounds that emanated from her throat and she struggled to hold those back.
The coaster trucked up the final hill for its final and highest drop. As it slowed, Rarity blinked and regained control of her staggered breathing, the voices of her two friends in front sounding like nothing more than muffles as her hearing faded in and out. Then sensation in her body slowly began to die down, and just as Rarity got ready to take a deep breath, the ride plummeted from its highest point, the mighty wind rushing over the ponies and blowing their manes back.

Rarity’s eyes widened and her pupils dilated as the sensation inside her exploded with tenfold the force as before hitting all of her nerves at once. The shockwaves went up to her brain, pierced down her spine and crashed into her pelvis causing her hips to gyrate and her whole body to seize and shake. Her vision went black as her eyes rolled back into her head. She arched her back as her whole lower half gyrated violently against the handle bar.

“Oh, OH, OHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” she bellowed.

Seconds later, all of her muscles relaxed and she leaned back, tongue to the side of her mouth, trying to catch her breath. Her mane no longer in its usual curl but ruffled and streaming down her face like she had just ran a marathon. Her thoughts spun as she slowly recoiled from what was nothing short of a mind blowing experience. She blinked and shook her head as the horror of the situation finally hit her.

“D-D-Did I just…?”

She squeezed her legs together and gasped, her cheeks flushing a deep shade of red. As she sat up, Applejack and Pinkie turned to her with smiles etched across their faces; their manes were just as disordered as hers. Pinkie was the first to speak.

“Weeeeeellllll?”

“It was… ok.” Rarity retorted before clearing her throat.

“Um, miss?”

Rarity’s heart raced as she shot a glance at the brown unicorn. She had forgotten he was there. She let her gaze slowly meet him mentally begging that he wasn’t aware of what happened.

“C-Could you let go now?”

Rarity looked down and noticed her hoof tightly wrapped around his, she pulled away quickly and blushed again as he nursed the throbbing hoof against his chest.

Applejack and Pinkie giggled as they hopped out of their seats, soon followed by their unicorn friend.

***************
Applejack and Pinkie smiled as the unicorn opened the door to her home. She turned to them and beamed a smile back. “Well ladies, that was certainly… interesting.”

“Sorry if’in it t’weren’t all we made it out to be sugarcube.”

“Oh it’s fine, darling, roller coasters just aren’t my thing, I suppose.”

Pinkie let out a sad sigh. “I could’ve sworn you’d like it!”

“Oh, don’t be so hard on yourself Pinkie, everypony’s different.”

Pinkie shrugged her shoulders and gave a nod.

“Well, I best get back to work. Ta-ta, ladies!”

Rarity closed her door and Pinkie folded her hoofs in disappointment.

“I could’ve sworn she’d absolutely, undoubtedly, positively love it Applejack! I was 329.5% sure of it!”

Applejack smiled as she titled her hat up. “I know sugarcube, but like she said, everypony’s different. Rollercoasters just don’t do nothin’ fer her.”

The two earth ponies continued to talk, their voices becoming more muffled the further and further they got from the Boutique. Rarity kept her ear firmly against the door until the only thing that grazed her eardrum was silence. Her horn glowed and a pillow laid itself in front of her. She face planted into it, tossing, turning and squeezing her legs together as her mind basked in the aftermath of the beautiful moment of euphoria she had experienced.

“OH SWEET CELESTIA!!!! THAT! WAS! MAGNIFICENT!”

She turned over again and stared at the ceiling; her arms and legs spread wide. She bit her bottom lip and elicited a soft moan as she allowed her mind to replay that moment over and over. Finally she sighed.

“Again...”

To Be Continued?

Comments

[Seanessy]

ATTENTION: Hey guys, thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed! Originally this story was going to be longer, but I realized it would make more sense if broken up into a one-shot series. I won't give away spoilers but the plan I have involves a certain pony -----> <----- co-starring aside Rarity and an insane story that still revolves around this roller coaster. At the same time, this story seems to do well as an enjoyable one-time thing. Just want your input.
Would you, as the reader, be interested in reading the adventure that takes place after Rarity discovers this "new form of relaxation"? (It won't get anywhere close to cloppy, I promise)

[KingofSquirrelz]

:3 gigity

[chaos2012]

Pinkie: Rarity, they just opened up a new roller coaster if you want to come.

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[easymac]

very good
As a roller coaster fan, the ride sounds epic

[Briianz]

Not bad. Rarity...What can I say?

[Always Breakfast]

Erm...that's not the kind of fun you're supposed to have on a rollercoaster

And I guess obligatory:

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[Olivine Ellva]

It's official.

Rarity x Roller Coaster. RariCoaster?
Either way, they are fuck buddies now.

[BaitG]

Well that was... interesting?

Nicely written though, so well done on that front.

[bahatumay]

Well, ok then. Not quite sure how to respond to that...

[Shrinky Frod]

The next one must feature an epic duel to the death between the Mustang and Tom for Rarity's affections.

[Ohiolad]

So like Emerald Flight said, she came?

[CoastalSarv]

1515095
Or they could have a threesome: strap Tom into a seat. What could possibly go wrong?

[musicman722]

reminds me of a vid i once saw, except that the ride was one of the slingshot rides and the guy was fully aware of what just happened

[Puppeteer]

I guess you could say that her friends convinced her to cum on the roller coaster.

[Ohiolad]

1515256

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Well played sir...................

[chaos2012]

1513916 perhaps you could have her trying to get her friends back to the theme park and trying to get back on the roller coaster while trying to hide her excitement

[Telaros]

oh LAWL. That... that That was one HELL OF A RIDE!
God, how is a guy supposed to compete with a rollercoaster like THAT? Im amazed no one noticed her mess in the cart or the smell that would grow over time on her coat and tail as she made her way home xD (may have stopped at the little fillies room to freshen up I suppose) oh man that was an exciting read lol the descriptions of what she went through were all too well detailed lol seriously, wings were sprung during this read lol

I can't help but laugh at the description of that brown colt with the noodle like mane as being a ponified version of your avatar :P

[Tibbles]

Wow. I'm actually kind of sad that I'm not a girl if that's what THEY get out of roller coasters.

[SuperPinkBrony12]

1514141 That's from the Season 3 opener if I'm not mistaken, and of course everyone including Pinkie Pie seemed to be shocked by Rarity suddenly losing it, before long that will the new dramatic Rarity complete with "I'll swallow your soul!"

1514526 Agreed!

[SuperPinkBrony12]

1515234 You do know you're never suppose to say that right, whenever someone says that things always go wrong.

[Olivine Ellva]

Seanessy, I HAVE to thank you for what you have done.

After I read this Roller coaster fan-fic I somehow started thinking about
the Final Destination movie series, probably because the movie with the Roller coaster.

So after about two hours of brain storming I have got to say I probably just came
up with the BEST Final Destination fan fiction ever! I'm writing it right now and I
have to say that the 'Big Accident' I have planned is going to blow yours and everyone
else's minds.

[Rainbow-Factory123]

that was........Something..... But it was funny!

[Master brony UNSC]

1514111 haha giggty giggty alright

[deletingthisaccount]

Yay. That was a highly enjoyable read!

[YukoAsho]

Not sure you even CAN come from a roller coaster.

That said, very cute and funny, good show.

[No more account]

OH MY!

[WhispersInTheDark]

I knew this was going to be a great story the moment I saw that hilarious cover art.