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Earth and Sky side story. AJ and Applebloom take the train to Appleoosa and make some new friends along the way.
Takes place during the events of Earth and Sky and crosses over at times, but stands on its own story-wise.
Characters will be added as they appear.
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WHY CAN I ONLY UPVOTE THIS ONCE!
Woah.
Do I see foreshadowing?
That was a quick down vote. Less than a minute after posting the new chapter.
What don't you like about it? I won't know unless you tell me.
Huh. I wasn't sure where you were going with the whole Jhongold thing. Bravo.
1603261Glad someone liked it. I really wanted to do something over the top to justify the comedy tag.
I just read the last three chapters after finally getting a good night's sleep.
What was I thinking?! I can see now why my readership has dropped by 75 percent. I really should have kept Soarin's personality as the goofball whose jokes sometimes get him into trouble, not to mention the grammatical errors and typos. I will try to salvage what I can starting next chapter.
Well, that escalated quickly.
Next chapter is going to bring big changes style-wise, hopefully for the better.
Poor Braeburn
can't wait for next chapter
Great chapter! Keep up the awesome work
HAPPY THANKSGIVING EVERYBODY!
If you don't celebrate Thanksgiving, then happy harvest, fall festival, or just plain autumn. Thanks for the reads.
So it's a first person AB fic? Cool.
AB is now my favourite CMC.
Soarin and Divin?? What's his parents called, Rising and Falling???
So is this a SoarinJack told from AB and Divin's perspective?
SoarinLuna?????
That is a pairing I've never heard of!!!!! But SoarinJack works better. The Goofball and
the Farm pony.
That's all for this one!!
So, Luna has visited Appleoosa then?
Ahh Braeburn, always making others feel uncomfortable!!!
Ouch.
I do have one problem though.
The next chapter button. It's missing!!!!!
Having recently seen that film for the first time, I actually understand that reference, instead of just knowing about the meme!!!
I want to hear more of Soarin's jokes!!!
On a side note, why are you being so mean to poor Soarin'?
Okay, so I've read the first eight chapters, but I can't really take anymore. To give you mt honest opinion, I see grammar errors everywhere, commas where they aren't supposed to be, and so, so many plotholes. I mean, you have a good idea going, but in general, I suggest that you get a proofreader, and re-write this whole thing, and try not to have any plotholes. I mean, hell, I can't really understand what happens from one chapter to the next.
1835287 I know, and I plan to do that after finishing MyLittle Dragon. I will probably rewrite Earth and Sky as well. I made a minor change to that which caused major changes to this and trying to keep up ended up causing a mess. I was still working on trying to find a style at this point.
Yes, there are grammar error- but I think it's OK. A very humorous story, I like it!
I love this story! Its. So. BEAUTIFUL.
You have any plans (or time) to pick this up?
2397783 It's already written, I just need to go over it and make sure it matches the new style. I also need to get it off my old phone. I'll try to get to it soon, it's just that school and My Little Dragon have taken up most of my time. Thanks for the offer though.
2399530
Great :-) I'll keep my eye on this
Where is the next chapter? Awwww
3934964 Holy cow, I forgot about this story. I'll have to dig around my computer and try to find it.
Love, love, LOVE this story, please update soon! It's just getting to the good part, and this is really adorable!
This needs an update!
I'm still here, hoping against hope