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Himni is a lonely 16 year-old looking for some friends. He has no idea what God has in store for him. Let me just say, it gets pretty bizarre, awkward, etc. Bronies do not exist in this story, but everything else does. Warning: Expect many other pop culture references.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 20 )

I'm guessing four walls?

It's spelled "spic and span", you misspelled it.

Hm...I see where this is going, but you need to make longer chapters. You should have combined the two. Would have worked great.

please continue this is a very great story :twilightsmile:

This seems like an interesting story. Could you perhaps upload the next chapter?

Arrgh! I smell a rat.

I only sees good comments for this story yet almost half of the thumbs be down.

Methinks the author be deletin' negative comments.

1526779yes... Fudge... Himni will not be swearing.

1528787Think again, I had absolutely no idea you could do that... Seriously, can you do that?:rainbowhuh:

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Arrgh! Don't be daft lad. See ye not the garbage pail at the end of each comment? Did ye never consider what it be for?

Needs a bit work here and there fix em and you'll have yourself an awesome fic :raritywink:

-Kiryu :moustache:

I would fell that way to but what about rainbows actions hmm, gets better and better , keep going!!!!!!!!:twilightsmile::heart:

Also write what you write dont let anybody stop you, not the dislikes, not the comments, you write and you write period

So Trollestia and God, who happens to also be a troll, sent the mane 6 and Spike to Earth?
I r interest!

I'm loving this story! Just update as much as possible.

Keep up the great work!:twilightsmile:

You wrote dialog for God, you wrote bucking dialog for God

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