An old deity returns, and he has some disturbing news for Celestia... The Trials of an Alicorn were never truly passed by Luna. Celestia doesn't take this well, but she keeps her cool. But will the arrival of 4 new ponies in Equestria tamper with Celestia's plan? Special thanks to my friends Brendan and Michelle for letting me integrate their OCs and well... I guess thank you to my brother for not killing me for making him a pony. Do note that some parts will be serious, but I'm not one for serious so you'll see some comic relief.
Chapters (3)
Interesting.
Watching :)
Beat you on it reigdar
I daresay it was actually rather good. Interresting consept. I can't wait to read it.
Only one thing, luna was a filly 1002 years ago? that make her a filly 2 years before nightmare moon? that timespan didn't make sense. The are supposed to be A LOT older than that.
Going on FIMfiction
About to click notifications when- LUNA'S NIPPLE, THAT LOOKS COOL!
Now to actually read it.
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Mmhmm
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Oh, Accord, you silly pony, you
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Okay! I'm done for now. *closes book shut*
Seems legit, except one thing that bothered me was that Accord never referred to his brother as Discord. But I do like how he's the Yang to Discord's Yin. And it was akward when Tia just started screaming for guards. I mean, one would think a millennia old being that raises the sun every bucking day can handle herself.
And I really dont give a crap whether I'm called a pegasister or female brony. I actually prefer brony instead of female brony but who cares.
Haha, Regidar! I done beat you!
Hmmm. What would Accord look like? Discord is random so...
YES I BEAT REGIDAR. FUCK YOU ALL! YOUR ARGUMENT IS INVALID!
Interesting story i would very much like to see where this goes. Keep up the good work
who is regidar?
1668281 Good job. Now you know it's pointless with no real world value.
1668418 Ohai.
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You guys are so cute.
1668465 Jimmy cracked corn and I don't give a flying feather!
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Buck you.
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1668523 Only if you kiss me first.
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AND THEN THEY FUCKED
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D- does this make me gay?
1668644 Only a little bit, but remember:
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Hey wait, YAY NOW I CAN PISS OFF THE HOMOPHOBES :D
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1668682 Your avatar is excellent.
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1668729 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
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wait, if you're not human... that means you're not male. That means I'm not gay!
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This explains it all.
1668732 Non-humans are gay too.
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FUUU
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10/10 Would Peel.
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Damn NSFW laws.
this story has potentiel, im going to pu it on my read later list , and see how it goes in the next chpter before faving this story. still with that said this story truley does have potential. also keep up the good writing work.
1668465 oh hi how have you been?
Seems pretty good, there is a point where I think Accord is supposed to be speaking, however it isn't italicized so I'm not sure if it's supposed to be his dialogue or narration, even though it's written as dialogue.
But otherwise, will be watching this.
1668048 crap your right... Fixing....
I didn't think Accord needed to come out and say Discord was his brother because Celestia knew who He was and their relation...
1668049 oh, sorry for bothering you one last time is that Celestia is absolutely afraid of Accord, but remember she gets ready for a fight when the guards don't come
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*you're.
Brain stop it right now
Seriosuly though, you're and your is very different. "You're" means "you" are while "your" means that something is "belonging to or associated with the person or people that the speaker is addressing".
It's a comon mistake, and even some people with englsih as mothers thongue mixes them up sometimes
1670034i know I derped
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*I
ok, now i'm just messing with you
anyay, can't wait for an update
1668137 It's hard to explain, Accord is... uhhhh, like a flawless creature... no wait, like a perfect... aw crap, I'll cross that bridge when I come to it.
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Why is there a sudden HiE?
1690585 ... Chaos is a wonderful thing...
That's all I'm saying... Oh and go ahead and tell me about a fic where the brony's family turns into ponies, cuz you can't I'm being almost original here
1690799 Oh sweet baby Jesus in his cradle, I need ponies STAT!
WHAT HAS SCIENCE DOOOOOOOOOOOONE?!?!?!?!?
(edit: wow...first comment...sweet.)
1753032 Science has done many... many things. More things than I can think of.
Double facehooves
1753041 darn you, you didn't get my reference. I was quoting Dragon Ball Z Abridged.
I like the new story, it's a shame that the last one didn't go so well, i really enjoyed reading it.
1811621 BRENDAN!! I was wondering where you were I could never find your username... So, your OCs being introduced in the next chapter, so is Michelle's.
1811765 hello i am back computer broke so i could not reply early, i hope everything is going well.
My awesome unicorn powers tell me there are some brilliant banters between Ike and Aaron coming up. Its me first HiE-fic - you definitely hooked me already.
But I honestly expected the fangirlish scream alot sooner. This happens to me I would most likely put the Manticore to shame - probably as soon as I saw me hooves.
Worrying wouldnt happen until later when I realize Equestria has no internet.
What have you done? A hater is my favourite protagonist? Antagonist?
And seems a general rule that every new visitor first bumps into Pink-ie Pie.
1811765 Hi, i am liking the story but you haven't been on in a while i hope everything is going good with your family.