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Feels like I missed something somewhere. Going back to reread previous chapters...
...well this turned shitty fast.
YAY FINALLY!
1236498 I wrote this chapter whilst focusing on school work, I wasn't actually trying to make a quality chapter, I was just trying to push one out without any concern for the quality. A.K.A. I didn't give a fuck about this chapter, I just wanted to entertain you motherbuckers.
1236943 ok then.
WELL THIS ESCALATED QUICKLY...
1237118 When you get pissed off or you're freaking the fuck out, don't you say reaaally stupid things?
Like, when I was younger, I said that I wished my sister was dead a lot, because I was a dick.
And seeing as how Peter regressed in that moment - and seeing as how he's based off of how I view myself - he just said it in the heat of the moment.
I was going to explain that in the same chapter, but I decided to wait for your reactions, because why the fuck not.
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NOT quality?
My good sir, this is the best chapter you've written in my opinion; the words flowed into each and didn't sound like the cliche you wrote in previous chapters... this one actually made sense
1237273 Oh, did it now?
Well, I'll be sure to take that into account.
Also, most of the time the reason as to why my shit makes no sense is this: I write a chapter, then I change something in the chapter, but I keep the same fucking wording, even though that wording does not properly apply to the new topic. For example, I'll write rather violently for something like a fight scene, but then I'll scrap the entire scene but still have it be slightly violent in how the characters interact, and it will seem like it's building to a climax but then it just settles down in a few random words that, honestly, don't seem humanly possible. Like, the characters would be super pissed, and then all that emotion would *poof* be gone. Emotions don't work that way, when someone gets angry, that anger either goes away when they realize that they're wrong, are agreed with, are knocked the FUCK out, or when the debate is settled. Even then, the anger would still be there as it slowly dwindled down to neutrality.
Overall, I just didn't properly string together scenes that I butchered from the original forms, and just jumped from one idea to the next without giving thought to the progression of emotion.
1237255 I guess...
1237347 You guess wrong! HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!
1237373 BUT HOW :O
1237386 I would say it's because you can only see in black and white, seeing as how you're a panda, but you're a Black Panda, so you can only see in black. Therefore, you had no idea what the choices are due to being a blind panda.
1237426 Trololo over here XD
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