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earth was destroyed by a nuclear meltdown super explosion

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AMNESIA

Ok. I have exactly 2 qualms with this story: first and fore most is the time distortion stuff. It feels like it's forced, and is really freaking awkward.
Qualm the second: at the end of the chapter when the 15(29?) year old gets thrown in a ave, I'm not really sure I understand that. Celestia just teleports everyone to her room, where she has a cave, and throws a human in it?

Oh yah... and the story is really well written so far and has plenty of potential.

I really don't mean for this to sound like a side note... Honest...
I have really got to stop pressing 'add' before finishing my thoughts.....

Isn't that the symbol for Chaos Undivided from Wh40k? Just sayin'.

Hmmm the seems all too convenient... guess I cant complain though. Good story. Although you seemed a bit anti-human at the start and you have some minor grammatical errors.

HEY! I've seen your avatar before! Did you get permission, sir?
btw, great story though.

108040 Actually, no. It's the general representation of the 'Chaos theory', the idea that the world is always changing rapidly. The new representation is of a cloud of particles of ambiguous size, shape, and formation, but the main thing stays the same: particles can become anything at any time, and so I decided that the representations of many paths is the best for this story (you'll see why later.)

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I had a typo, 'cave' was meant to be 'cage'.
And the reason as to why they throw Peter Roose in a cave will be explained. I don't plan on leaving any loose ends.

108226 Thanks! And actually, my avatar was just ripped straight from google images, I have no idea who originally made it. If you know who, could you tell me so I could add a small 'image courtesy of *blank*' on the bottom?

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I have the same problem as you, with the need of an 'add' button.
The explanation for the time distortion will be explained, trust me. Everything will be explained.

When's the next chapter gonna come out about?

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The original creator is ColorSymphony on deviantart. It's one of her line of "Steampunk Equestria" Pictures. They're really cool.

108964 Thanks! I'll look into it, and I'll try to stop being lazy and pixel in some credit.

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Keep in mind that I'm not saying get rid of it, just give credit where it's due. But that's what you were going to do, non?

Ugh...reading the chapters myself and I'm finding all these grammatical errors...
Me from last month, Y U NO PROOFREAD?

Very nice.
Me like the foreshadow.

I'll find out later, I have my sanity to destroy.
YAY, destruction of sanity :3

so... fucking... CONFUSED!!!!!!!!!!!

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I agree