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DOBA chapter man! psycological trauma, physiological trauma, physical pain, mind control, th' list goes on and on! it's frikking epic!
wait. i thought i was proofreading this. or is this english class all over again?
also, i might be submitting an OC soon. (how?)
I honestly thought I would never get to read a new chapter for this story.
Third!
570951 didn't want to spoil the surprise for this chapter. For anybody. :P
Very nice chapter, Gylden.
Like how you portrayed Metall like a cold, dead bastard
EXACTLY how I wanted him to be... but I must say I'm not looking forward to all the sappy love stuff with Celestia
571733 don't worry, I'm not doing any. Metall won't ever fall in love with her.
Deajer den Trollmann is the most badass name I have ever seen. Ever.
I have a feeling my computer has been auto reading again shit
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ya just SPOILED it bro....
meh thanks anyway
574761 Who says I did?
Well now, this is certainly not good.
Crazy self who knows more than sane self is angry at sane self and wants to kill everything?!
Mind control, true love, false love, Discord with too much time on his hands, shadow wars, awesome swords, kick-A OCs, awesome super-powered mythical beings, character development, long story-lines, hot sex, lukewarm sex, rather tepid sex, loyalty, danger, intrigue, confusion, Pinkie physics, new characters, old characters, story development, gaining magic powers, Celestia teaming up with Chrysalis, dogs of war, puns, dragons, ponies and SO MUCH MORE.
*inhales*
Right, it's awesome, and I haven't posted on any of the previous chapters 'cuz I was trying to catch up. So it's all in one post, in the first three sentences!
587525 Wow...
BTW I really didn't realize how epic the idea of Celestia teaming up with Chrysalis was. It just hit me, now
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The only thing scarier, IMO, is Cadence and Chrysalis team-up...
Consider it this way: Chrysalis was more than a match for Celestia in full god-mode when running on stolen love, what will she be able to do with love freely given?
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You, sir, have just sprouted ten million fanfictions.
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Really? I thought those were hairs.
But yeah, this is why I like the stories in which Chrysalis' hive was an anomaly.
You know, where changelings are usually solitary.
*sigh*....
I wanna go rage on some Canterlot guards and spill their guts out...
and cut off their legs...
and then lop off their heads..
Please tell me that time will come, Gylden...
608859 I really thought it was more similar to Neil Gaiman's, what with the prevalence of dialogue rather than descriptive language, but, okay.
I'll look him up. Thanks for referring me to a new author!