James Willoughby was a former British Army corporal, but now, he is a Chimeran Hybrid.
He thought he was alone, the only one to break free from the grasp of Angels.
He was wrong. He found others, former humans who joined him.
They fought in the Battle of London, aiding the British and American forces to penetrate the London Tower and destroy it, causing a chain reaction that destroyed every other tower in the British Isles.
Now, they wake up in a tranquil, serene land that has not seen conflict in many years.
Can they retain their humanity, or will they succumb to their darker, feral selves, sowing death and destruction upon the world's peaceful inhabitants?
Chapters (15)
So, this is just a teaser bit. Tell me what do you think of it. Should I keep going, or just aim for the trash bin already?
Awesome story. A couple of errors here and there, but mostly spelling mistakes. Cant w8 for more
fuck i wanted to see celestia getting killed for being a bitch
I like it.
granted. not what i expected whenyou told me james almost eats celestia. still a great story
cant w8 for more
giggity, James almost ATE celestia. Also great so far got any descriptions for what they look like? or maybe even pictures?
1528685 She wasn't really being a bitch, just overprotective.
1529713 Thanks! Comments like these are what keep me going.
1529946 Well, I shall endeavour to appease thee!
1530084 I shall put some pictures below so you can see what the merry gang of misfits look like.
Here's James. He's a Hybrid, the bread and butter of Chimeran ground forces.
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Here's Jennifer. She's a Steelhead. Has a gun that fires through any solid object in its path.
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Here's Fred. He's a Titan. Can take lots of damage before going down.
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Here's Ted. He's a Slipskull. Sort of a skirmisher that tries to flank you and loves to take pot-shots at you.
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Here's Snaggletooth. A Leaper. The result of a Crawler failing to find a suitable human body to infect and instead infects an animal instead.
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Aaand here's Tag. A Howler.
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1532553 overprotective and being a bitch are the same thing sometimes
This is now favourite'd.
Although, how does a titan even fit inside of a house in the first place? Would'nt he plough the entire thing into dust just by trying to go through the front door? Are you perhaps talking about a 'ravager'?
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The house was half-destroyed some time before Fred made his residence there. Besides, Ravagers didn't make their bombastic appearance until Resistance 2.
FINALLY! Another resistance fan. Thanks for this. Would you mind taking a look at my own Resistance crossover 'Resistance: Equestria'.
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I have it in my 'Read Later' list, with another nine stories (too much procrastination on my side). Also, check out my other stories, see if there's anything that catches your eye.
1532837 Interesting to say the least. You are very imaginative.
Though, don't you think Celestia was a little too quick to judge them so harshly, especially since they weren't attacking. (THough, going by appearance, I can kind of understand.) Also, isn't Twilight curious or something about them. As well, the characters just seem to accept this, on both sides. Okay, maybe the chimera would just go with it, because they were created into horrific creatures out of the most darkest part of humanities mindset. Maybe a small rewrite, or elaborate more into this later on.
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The Chimera are alien, actually. Came here with the Tunguska Event. 1912, was it?
1533237 I know. I'm a Resistance fan too remember? I was being metaphorical. (I wouldn't be writing a Resistance crossover myself if I didn't know the history.) 1908 actually.
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Serves me right for not lurking in Resistance Wiki more. What are my other fics like, by the way? I've put most of my effort in Price of Peace.
1533749 I've only been keeping up with the Steel Battallion story. Sorry. I'll try and get to your other stories soon.
And I would like to say, that I do like them, they do need improvement. I know I'm being a hypacrit, as Resistance: Equestria isn't without it's own flaws, but once you've finished these stories, I think you should go back and edit them. Sometimes a second look can yield newer and better ideas, or fix old ones.
I would suggest fixing pacing. Sometimes, it seems you rush things. Which is sad, because I find quite a bit of the things you bring up fascinating. (A Titan drinking tea and being a gentleman...That mental image I shall treasure for the rest of my days.) Also, You should note that a Titan is actually made up of several humans. So, is one just dominant, or does this chimera just have a sentience of it's own? (Like my own chimera.)
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You make a solid point, dude. I can't help myself. I will have to finish these fics and then give them all a second check. I shall be scrutinous!
1533865 And I'll promise to do the same.
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:)
1534078 Great song choice. Never heard this before, but I'm glad you brought it to my attention. Thanks new bestest friend.
Discord pops up. "You have no idea what you've just done. This writer is a maniac I tell you. A MANIAC!"
I glare at him. "You're making that up."
"Remember...."
"Alight." I cut him off. "But it's only some of the time."
Discord rolled his eyes. "RIIIIIIIGht!"
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Cool! And I'm not schizophrenic.
And neither am I.
1534107 Eh, to each their own.
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Find a happy place... *gibberish*
1534120 *Evil laughter*
1534133
...Yeah, I got nothin'.
1534137 Indeed. *adjusts monocle and blows on a bubble pipe* It seems, good sir, I have bested you.
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The Game.
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1534146 The Game? Ah, yes. A good game of witty banter. I do say, good fellow, you need to improve you standing in such.
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You could stand to use more background detailing;
The cracked roads, the crumbling houses, etc.
Also, the initial confrontation with the Princess could have gone down with more description about his internal feelings, how she looked to them - imposing? intimidating? etc.
Well, I've been looking everywhere for a sentient Chimera story... and it's an MLP crossover.
Not what I had in mind, but I'll take it. This is now tracked. As for my thoughts, your dialogue between the ponies? A bit weak. At least compared to your dialogue among the Chimera, which is amazing. Overall the first contact situation almost feels rushed, like you were running out of space, or time, or something. Once again, this story is great, and these are just my thoughts.
1587654
You tickle my ego in all the right places.
this story is good, It was a good thing I favorited this :)
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Comments like these are what get me outta the bed every morning. Be sure to check out my other work, see if there's anything you like!
1588211 I will does that. :3
1588224
Whoo-hoo! *pulls a Homer*
1588657 *BROHOOF*
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*rams head through ceiling*
1588778 that's another way to d o it! xD
1588802
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a contingent you say？
Dam, thats Overkill...for the chimera
1588808 lolwat?
1588895 what you mean chimera will whoop there asses
more
moRE
MORE
1589009
Uh... Nothin'.
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Relax thine mammaries! I shall do it as soon as possible!
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It should be pretty fun.
1591949 im kind of glad the chimeras fight with guns
as long as I die by their bullets and not their ultra sharp lookin teeth, I'll be okay..
that nightmarish hellhole is reserved for Necromorphs