Twilight Sparkle awakens in an old abandoned house with no idea where she is and no memory of how she got there. She quickly discovers that all the exits are barred and any attempt to use magic to escape backfires, the house seems to have been taken over by some mysterious force and Twilight Sparkle is caught up in its cruel little game. As she explores the house she comes across various puzzles and riddles apparently leading her to a way out as well as several other deceased ponies. She soon realizes she isn't alone in this house and whatever force has taken it over has only just begun its twisted little games. A homage to Horror Survival games such as Silent Hill, Resident Evil and Clock Tower.
An entry into the Nightmare Night 2012 contest held on Equestria Daily
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Oh my god...This was the most amazing story iv'e read in a while. My god man... This shit sent shivers down my spine, and gave me goosebumps MULTIPLE times...
***SPOILER ALERT STOP READING THIS SHIT RIGHT NOW!***
At first i was thinking " Oh god, another PinkiePie torture thing... But it wasn't! And the very thing to salvation, was the thing you're SUPPOSED to run away from... Felt horribly bad for the pony who wrote the letter thing. That's like the worst way to die, to wait for help and salvation, only to never see it, and still die waiting... This was truly amazing.
I don't know how i'm going to bed tonight now, but i'm damn sure as hell gonna try. 5/5 10/10 all my bits/Monies TAKE IT ALL!
before reading, I'm guessing it's going to be kinda like Amnesia:The Dark Descent.
EDIT:
Well, Twilight's screwed. Whoever the voice was I can't even imagine who it was. I don't even think Discord would be able to conjure something like that up.
It did kinda reminded me of Res. Evil and Silent Hill, but the only things relative that I found was the hunter (that's what I call it) and the mansion, and the voice and game part only reminded me of saw.
Great story, bro.
>>Blaze0
Thanks for the feedback, I enjoy horror writing a lot so it's good to know I can get the desired result
>>Firefan645
Yeah, there's a bit of Amnesia and Saw in here too, though I've never actually player/watched either in detail, I have watched let's plays and reviews though so I know at least a decent bit about them
I can never find horror stories as good as this one! Bravo!
I like it,
no gore or anything
6757725 wouldn't call it scary, though