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WUT???....... 0.0
:fluttercry:DUDE

Horsecaust?

Gallopcaust?

I'm terrible I know.

WHY U KILL OFF EARTH PONEHS CELESTIA!!! :flutterrage:

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but seriosly... WHY!? this plot line have worked in a time with Discord. but with Celestia? with 2 earth ponys being the berrers of the elements? are you fucking insane?! i wont read this but i wont rate this with one star ether because this story as an idea has a LOT of room for improvement that i think you should look at.

Wow just...im not even sure what to say to this...

Well, this seems like an interesting read...

holy shit, what a story, yet it kept me interested, will track, for now...

I can only say that I hope you don't go the 'Night' route (by Elie Wisel, good story but fuck man)

Ths snt offensve at all.

WTF am I reading?
But in all seriousness, I'd call this a very touchy subject to be writing about, and it is without a doubt going to receive a whole lot of criticism and complaint.
Just saying, you have been warned...
(Also, you killed FlutterShy, and I will never forgive you for that:fluttercry:)

ok, im not reading any further. this is just stupid. and anyone, ANYONE with a mind as fucked up as to have a crossover with my little pony and fucking hitler ruled germany is a down right motherfucking sick fuck! i wish i could vote you down lower than 1 star. :twilightangry2:sick fuck!

I...Augh...

What....

Guah!

... no! no this is not okay!

I mean...

guaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!!!

102925
Take lesson zero, times it by 64 + brainwashing= this Twilight.
Over all this is good, would be better if its longer.
How can it be offencice, hasn't mentioned the people who died in the real life one so there no harm done.
More please.:moustache:

102945
Good point, well put.
Good day to you sir, good day. :moustache:

102945 Thanks for the input updating now.

By the way everyone reasoning behind Celestia's and Twilight's motives will be revealed further into the story, you can expect Chapter 2 very shortly.

102953
Thats god, now people can't caomplain, they have been warned.
Now, more story, please?:fluttershysad::fluttercry:
Good day.:moustache:

102958 Have to edit further chapters first, but trust me there will be more.

pretty fucked up but pretty interesting too. :derpyderp1: MOAR

The Right thing, that is what you have done Twilight, the right thing.
Hail Celestia.:trollestia:

and that why folks is why you hail princess lunar and not that scum of a tyrant princess celstria

108396
It seems we have a rebal.
Fire the moon lancher.:moustache:

110434 yes we do master will i am here to spread the message of saurporting lunar :)

112429 by george commander thats terrbile but awesome at the same time how can you like a princess who want to wipe out all the earth ponies shes a tyant and will die for lunar

112518
Enternal night= plant life die= plant eaters die= meat eaters die= all life gone.
Unicorns= usefull
Pegus= Useful
Earth ponies= manual labour that can be replaced by more efficent farming methords and magic.
Thus Earth ponies= waste of space, food and air.
Good day.:moustache:
Hail Celestia.:trollestia:

112518

Your a fucking retard, I think everyone else is content with humoring you, but I'm not.

OFF TO THE EARTH PONY CAMPS WITH YOU!

you may take me to a camp but your never take my freedom ill make sure laruen knows about these camps then well see how big and mighty your celestria is when lunar takes over

114439
Wait... celestia, I though I was doing this for fun, you mean we get paid to kill the usless ponies.
BEST, DAY, EVER.
Also, whats laruen doing to do? Throw rainbows?
Good day.:moustache:

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114952 OBJECTION if not i will get the doctor the oncomeing storm to make sure this dosernt happern or ill tell chaerllie :)

116534
Words, they're hard to use aren't they?
If you don't like the story then leave it and stop rambling on like a madman.
Good Day.:moustache:

116593 oh no dont get me wrong i loved the story its got a intresting plot but i do love comments war with you mister emperor you have gained my respect sir

116616
Please, Please:fluttercry: use commas and full stops.
Good day.:moustache:

116619 Im not good at spelling :(.

Chapter 4 should be up by sometime today. Just don't have a big lunch before you read it if you know what I mean... :pinkiesick:

116865
It's not spelling, it is punctuation.
Good day.:moustache:

116870
Your'e looking at a veteran of all the cupcake stories, sweet apple massacre, rainbow factory, Cheerilee's Garden, all the cupcake songs and musicals, all the luna games, all the creppy images that exist, all the goe fics on this site and all the cupcake animations and movies.
Bring it on.:moustache:

116910 oh german your awesome.

116910 oh german your awesome.116918 also whats rainsbow factory?

116956
Look it up.
Also look for the song on youtube, the pmv version.
Good day.:moustache:

118706
Yes, yes it is.
Good day.:moustache:

WRITE MOAR!! or I will get :trollestia: on you

Dark... so dark....

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