Ten new ponies come into town out of nowhere. They claim to be peaceful, but when a murder is committed, Twilight's early suspicions get out of control. Conflict erupts between the newcomers, the citizens of Ponyville, and even the "mane" six. But, there is a secret behind all of this that no pony expects...
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Sounds interesting...
*Edit*: Interesting, though it was kind of fast paced.
Yay he fell off a roof I'm sooo happy
Also RD is a Ninja! Don't question my logic!!!
Yay
Awsome can't wait for more
I LOVE you
no homo
hmm, something I haven't read yet, a idea I haven't heard of.... FAVORITE O__O
Woohoo
love it. I need MOAR 
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Oh and my best friend would sing
Don't you worry, Don't you worry Child
jimmy Savel has a plan for you
1593600 Oh my god! Can I use this song?!?!
Still fast paced; you could have easily made most of these chapters, adding LOTS more detail, into two or three different chapters. When it comes to details and descriptions, the more the merrier! Please try to add more.
1595409 yeah sure it's not mine anyway and I don't think the people who made it mind it's used all the time
1596617 I totally understand what your talking about... I've been trying to "fluff up" the last few chapters (and my editor says I should stop listening to you). But it's just so hard
Well he's screwed
Well she's fucked
BOOYAH!!
Ha words of Wisdom right the from an ageless Proncess of Equestria
I shall never stop stalking you *begins to breath heavily down your neck*
But weirdness (and possible future
) aside this was a great story and I really enjoyed it. It's just a bummer when it comes to the epilogue. Not that there's anything wrong with it it's fine how it is 
so is there any other stories ya got??