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iOctavia 32489

Joined September 2012
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    iOctavia's Stories (3)

    • Forgotten Memories
      What happens when somepony you love is taken away from you?

      3,448 words · 682 views · 57 likes · 1 dislikes
    • The Chaos of Harmony
      What will happen when Discord truns good? Will he trick the Princesses into believing he has finally turn good? How will this affect Equestria?
      5,410 words · 1,127 views · 72 likes · 5 dislikes
    • The Night That Changed Her
      Octavia's newfound love, WUBS
      3,525 words · 602 views · 28 likes · 2 dislikes
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    What if somepony you love was taken from you? Twenty years to the day, a mare had her father taken away from her, she visits him to celebrate her birthday, but what if her father is trapped in a dark cold prison. Will she be able to talk to him? Will she have the best birthday ever? Who is she and who is her father?

    First Published
    20th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    11th Nov 2012

    Comments ( 28 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    sweet it made me cry :raritycry::raritydespair::fluttercry:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Reminds me of the "Daddy Discord" video.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Please tell me this isnt the end! Its just too sad to leave without a second chapter :fluttercry:

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Poor Discord.:flutterrage:

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    That sent my heart aflutter beatiful and wonderfuly done. I wish you smiles and gentle breezes :twilightsmile: Well done

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1474596

    There might be an epilogue coming soon...

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    This was a sweet beginning Octavia expecting more and all the D'awww:heart::fluttercry:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #9 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #10 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #11 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Wow this is good I didn't cry but I was choked up at the end.

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :fluttercry::fluttercry:

    I love this. So. Much. :fluttershbad:

    I know what it's like to not have a dad. I won't go into the details 'cause it'll make everything awkward. :fluttershyouch:

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    /* manly tears */

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Dear Screwball, my lovely daughter.

    I'm grateful that you came to visit (I was actually brought to tears by such a thing), I usually don't get that much attention that often. Pity, no pony knows the fun they're missing when there's no chaos around, BORRING. But don't worry about me sweetie, I can find ways to fix that. And that's before I bust out of imprisonment once again; I can't wait to try it out, especially on a certain special someone, hehehe....

    Thanks for coming by and for the cake. Although I couldn't touch it, I knew it was as delicious as any sort of mayhem.

    See you again, soon.

    Love

    Discord

    P.S. Just so you know my darling, although Celestia will always have special place in my heart, Dady has moved on and may have found a new love in his life (too bad she's on Celestia's side.....for now, hehehe...). Her name is Twilight she makes me want to Sparkel. Shhh, don't tell any pony

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Well, this is really good for your second fanfic! :twilightsmile:

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Screwball has her own Character Tag, you know.

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Ow! Right in the feel.

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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    that was so great! made me chock up a little

    i better see a part 2 to this.

    this is way too good to be a one shot! so please write more i wana know if Discord has his happy ending!

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1554179

    I'll be working on part two next week, I've just been busy with other fics and school.

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1555252

    cool and i know what you mean ive been writing none stop for a while now XD

    #21 · Chapter 2 · 31w, 2d ago · · ·
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    daawwwww:pinkiesad2:

    #22 · Chapter 2 · 31w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Kinda fast epilogue but still aww.

    #23 · Chapter 2 · 31w, 2d ago · · ·
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    D'AWWW :pinkiesad2:

    This is awesome. I love you. :rainbowkiss:

    #24 · Chapter 2 · 31w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Terrific :pinkiehappy:

    #25 · Chapter 2 · 31w, 1d ago · · ·
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    not bad it was a nice ending im happy it ended like this ^_^

    #26 · Chapter 2 · 29w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Oh gawd, didn't realize ya made another part. Such generosity Celestia has. Maybe in some time, when Twilight isn't connected to the Elements of Harmony, they will see each other. :pinkiesad2: :pinkiesad2: :pinkiesad2:

    #27 · Chapter 2 · 25w, 3d ago · · ·
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    D'AWWW:pinkiesad2:

    #28 · Chapter 1 · 1w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :fluttercry:

    Annnnd Everything hurts again..

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