I don't even English at all.
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(FIRST) *reads title Why is this in clopfics?
*reads discription* DAFUQ
Ok this bugs me to no end so i'm going to point out a few errors that make this a tad hard to read. i'm only going to mark the first six I come across.
This is confusing to read
I believe you are missing an as in here.
I think you mean being
this needs a period.
Just who would be far better. Whose is like asking "Whose is that?"
Insert by in here.
If English is not your first language I do apologize, but do try to get a proofreader or editor to help avoid stuff like this.
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I've been looking for someone to take the job, aren't you interested? I pay with frienship
i've got an ok amount of free time. i'm willing to help. though i cant promise it'll be perfect, it'll hopefully be easier to read and understand. also. aside from the obvious lack of English the fic it self is good.
When you finish, I shall read.