• Member Since 6th Jun, 2012
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Meliane Snapdragon


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Luna set off to reacquaint herself with her night, only to found an anomaly in her domain.
Only this anomaly is darker than dark and worse than Nightmare Moon.
But at its core, a lonely entity will find a true friend.

The darkness will not let it happen.

A Kirby MLP:FiM crossover.

I own nothing but the idea and the cover image.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 19 )

1632940 Quiet. Go and fix that while you have the chance to save yourself.

1632954 I will strive to make it happen!:rainbowdetermined2:

It's a great start, but I ask that you do some editing. You've got a few formatting and grammar issues to take care of. If you need someone to do it for you, ask around.

In the meantime, I'm gonna watch this.

MMMMMOOOOOORRRREEEEE!!!!!!:flutterrage:

I keep coming back to this story...only because Zero-two is one of my favorite villians, mostly because she is not completely evil she is just saddness and sorrow incarnate. I have always felt bad for her. :pinkiesad2:
:fluttercry:
:fluttershbad:
:fluttershyouch:
:fluttershysad:
:ajsleepy:
:raritycry:
:raritydespair:

Awesome. Some grammer errors, but it epic none-the less...

Now I need your help dear reader.
Zero-Two should be a She or a He?

1702858 Thank you, But keep in mind that I might not post a new chapter for quite a while and, Since its like a pool. Well you get the point.:twilightblush:

Zero-two is an it, but most people call it a him because of the characters background, SO I say Zero-two shall be a he.

I can't wait for the next chapter. Zero(-two) is such a sad character. In fact, I never really viewed Zero(-two) as a villain despite its (his) actions. :fluttershysad:

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I change my mind... Zero-Two needs to be female... It makes sense since Zero-Two only felt sorrow and is not actually evil. It also make for a more interesting story if Zero-Two is female.

Wel dinok? Zu waa nokt duu sak neh du'wast tel ro... Ezzen rel?

All I can really say about the story is this.

Is there going to be another chapter? Because it would be great to see another one.

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