Somepony who is trust worthy and just likes to have a good time. I've always loved writing, I think it's time for me to move to fanfics
Although Nightmare moon seemed to be evil the heart of luna remained her love for her sister and sharing a duty remaind as a memory stuck for 1000 years couldn't of healed her pain. She was feared she was scared of her black heart Her saddness overwhelming began to tear her apart, her wishes to be with her sister were constant. Is there a happy ending in a black hearted mare, or was it too late?
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I'm going to say this now before any of you comment, If there is any spelling mistakes or incorrect grammar usage I apologise, I'm trying my hardest. I hope you enjoy this fanfiction. This story brought me tears to my eyes because of what I know how Luna is feeling were as no one really knew how much pain she was in because it was all about Princess Celestia.
And as you can tell the story rhymes, I didn't want a simple straight forward story I wanted to give it a poetic edge. I see poems as peacefull and sometimes heart clutching,I wanted to add that type of effect to this Fanfiction.
Enjoy xx
Interesting definitely goes well with "Lullaby for a Princess" A few grammer problems but other than that good.
I'll keep my eye on this.
1461883 Thats how I got the idea for this story XD I love that song it's so beautiful and sad, perfect inspiration for the story being told.
The story itself looks good, but there's a lot of grammar mistakes. You might want to look into an editor.
Nicely done, yes there are some grammar issues, but despite that this is well done. They are sisters, you captured that perfectly.
1469210 I sent it too a mate of mine to fix some of them, it just turned out worse than it already was
But I shall try my hardest to correct them 
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If you're using Firefox, there should be built-in grammar check and spellcheck. All you gotta do is turn it on. I could be mistaken though, I haven't run Firefox in a long time.
1469752 Unfortunatly I don'y my stupid computer is stupid and seems to hate change. I was at college when I finished this, so I put it through a updated spell checker thingy mabob and it corrected some things,it was an improvement but some things are still wrong.