Somepony who is trust worthy and just likes to have a good time. I've always loved writing, I think it's time for me to move to fanfics
The mane 6 are in trouble! Ponyville has been thrown into anarchy from a virus that is unknown to any pony. Trying to find a cure, and battling the un-dead ponies across Equestria, they come across a new Left 4 Dead gang. Do they join forces or do they split up into their own paths and do things separately. Follow the gang on their epic quest to restore harmony to Equestria.
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Description suggests you can't structure a plot worth a damn... I dread to gander but I shall.
I dont know why people dont like this that much
but still I like it 
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I like this............why....because obama
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I can understand that. This was an idea that sprung to mind when I was with friends, Although this isn't really original but the way i'm going to lay everything out surely would give it a unique tweek.
But you gave me some useful criticism, if you could give me some ideas about a new plot line then feel free. I'd like all the constructive criticism i can get, improvement is a key. xx
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Yeah i actually thought after writing it....wait there are like millions of these XD
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People are weird that's why :)
I tryed ter got ter jef the kilar Is culdnt
So if Spike was in the cover would he be caring fuel tanks Molotov and incendiary rounds?
Nice story not bad.
I'm weird, so I love this.
Awesome! 
I kinda want to know about Celestia
and Luna... Still, no Luna icon... 
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jeff the killer is my pet :) x
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I'm not gunna give spoilers about the next few chapters but you will find out what spikes up too :)
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Don't you worry you will soon get your celestia and luna chapter XD
<Rainbows thrown grew> - I'm sure you mean frown.
<Twilight put her hoof on the ground with a thud and shouted "We got harmony to restore. Let's go girls!" On their new travels all together, they came across something they never encountered before. It wasn't an infected pony. It was a...Human?> - The fuck? did I miss something? If not you need to take this thing to an editor or take some time out and re examine your plot structure and fix this. There is no lead up to this at all and honestly I was thinking this might not be bad till then. And to be frank I was assuming they were half anthro from the cover art.
But seriously I dont know where to begin with that. You really need to back it up, take this chapter down and redo it. Maybe it can be goo, but you need transitions of some sort. From the sound of it this "Ciara" Neednt enter for a few more chapters.
1761806 um go to sleep
I love this story already! for some reason I thought of Lollipop Chainsaw
anyways you get a thumbs up and fav from me also I'll just leave this here
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I love lollipop chainsaw XD pinkie is kinda based on her you will find out soon enough x
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Actually I was going to edit that I was reading through, but I was also meant to comment that I have dyslexia and not many people have time to proof read or aren't interested. I'm trying my best, I'm not taking it down just because of a plot line. It doesn't need a build up to the first character as I decided I needed Ciara to be someone quick and snappy therefore so was her introduction was to reflect her persona. The fact that the rest of her group have bigger lead ups. But thank you for the criticism it will surely help me improve.
1771370 my point is you have them run off and then just say "in their travels they find...." and boom new character. there needs to be some substance there, some sort of transition. its less about the short character intro (though i think the reactions would be different) and more about the transitions. not having transitions can break a good story and it has the potential to be good. If you put the effort in I may be willing to help proof read.
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I'll try and think of some things. I might have it switch to her point of view on what she's doing and stuff then it switches back...Could that work?
1782720 you could get away with alternating first person points of view the easiest. Thought that would mean re writing the first chapters.
1785376 Well last night I came up with an Idea so I'm going to change it and hopefully it makes a huge difference :)
1785500 awesome and if you need a pre reader/editor let me know.
1786908 Will do, right now i can't write very well not every day you have your dog lach on to your hand -__- But i'm hoping to get this edited by sunday and my 3rd chapter done on wednesday next week XD
17873988 well good luck and I look forward to reading it whenever it is finished. And heal upp quick, that sucks.
Dash....Y u so bitchy
1996093 I took her kind of arrogant bitchy persona and placed it in the book :) i think bitchy fits her perfectly....as well as rarity ;)
1996116 Agreed
Awesome!