Sunny Blast, a unicorn who lives in Canterlot, is suddenly sent to a different dimension called Azeroth, with only three colors of ponies. She gets send to the Herd, the faction that has an eternal war against the Alliance.
Kich, on the other side, is originally from the Herd, and she gets suddenly sent to a different dimension which happens to be Equestria.
Read as the ponies get used to the new cultures and all the experiences they have as they are teleported to different dimensions.
Chapters (4)
Azeroth? As in the place Raven from DC's Teen Titans was born?
1455009 No. Azeroth is the main planet from World of Warcraft. That's the crossover
1455009 Raven is from Azarath* c:
1457152
Oh big difference in the spelling..
Alright though, good luck with your fic, I'll be prayin' for ya.
BTW, your icon kinda hurts the eyes. The colors are too sharp, at least for me.
1457180 Is it better now?
1457201
Yes, but is your fic comedy based or what? I mean what's the overall tone?
1457212 It is, I should say, more adventure concentrated.
1457271
Then you're going to want a cover that exemplifies the adventure concept, because right now it looks more comedy related.
1457308 I was going to ask a friend of mine who does art to do a good cover for my story, but for now It'll be just a visual of Sunny Blast.
1457321
About that, self inserts are generally frowned upon here. It'll take a lot to get people interested, as most of them see it as wish fulfillment, which it kinda is. Also, "Sunny Blast" is not a very good pony name, it sticks out a bit. Take for instance my OC's name, Shifting Sands.
It seems to blend more. This is because, from what I have noticed, pony names tend to be more like expressions. "Twilight sparkle" can easily become "The twilight sparkles" or "Rainbow Dash", it easily becomes "A dash of rainbow". See what I mean? That's just personal preference though, so don't take it to heart.
1457377 I understand. I probably will change my name :\ and it's very hard to make me mad, so you can critisize anything on the story, it will only help c:
1457689
Well, ok. Another thing, don't make chapters less than a thousand words each. I have a three thousand word minimum for most of my chapters. Also, take time writing them, don't rush. Take the time to think out the premise, characters, locations and such. In the end, it'll be worth it, because people will see the work you've put into it.
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okai c:
Sunny, I feel that this is rushed. This chapter was random, why is royality strolling around Canterlot. Some things are left un-explained, and the dialog was badly portraied. Fix some things up grammaticlly, and with the quick and unenjoyable feel of this story. I like the consept, but I seriousally consider editing.
8 mustaches out of ten